The Hermit

Collette Edwards on Sep 9, 2009

Tags: cave, cuss, ditty, elf, Frown, Grouch, Grunts, hermit, himself, poem, Poetry, Scrooge, sighs

Just a little ditty about a hermit.

He was a grouch,
a mean ole cuss.
He wanted nothing to do,
with any of us.
~
He wouldn’t play,
even one game.
Though he treated all,
he meet the same.
~
He’s not the life of the party.
He never smiles.
His grunts and sighs,
go on for miles.
~
Next to him,
scrooge is a jolly old elf.
He’s so mean,
He can’t stand the sight of himself.
~
So now he’s a hermit,
He lives in a cave.
No one want him around,
cause he won’t behave.

~Collette~
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cutedrishti8 on Sep 9, 2009
Nice one ….Great work…
Emma Green on Sep 9, 2009
This one made me chuckle, good work!
ken bultman on Sep 9, 2009
Good write-up about an individualist.
kirstynjackaboos on Sep 9, 2009
hehe, well done you! x
lillyrose on Sep 9, 2009
you have been a busy bee today! another great poem, I always fancied being a hermit and just living with my dogs but you have put me off now! lol
Darla Cooke on Sep 9, 2009
Nice poem!
ashan1614 on Sep 9, 2009
This is cute. I know some folk I WISH would become hermits. But they hang around just to spite me.
Tanya Wallace on Sep 9, 2009
lol great work,love the humor in it!Your wording flowed wonderfully and had grat imagery!
Birgit Niveaux on Sep 9, 2009
a humorus poem and flowed very well.
alc on Sep 10, 2009
Terrific write and was humorous, thanks for sharing!
kizichat on Sep 10, 2009
hahaha… nice poem as always collette. keep them coming

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