Nature Poetry.

As I pause putting curing water on our new home rooftop,
I see the distant highlands and the neighboring treetops.
The highlands below the cumulus cover,
Are showing the greens and the various colors.
Ah, I say to myself, as I resume putting water,
He the creator, of such fab creations,
Make us the little builders of our homes look in fascination.
He has created the home for us all,
To live and let live till we finally get a call.

The treetops with homes of the flying species,
Not in my sight but surely in the trees.
I wonder what they are thinking about our abode,
Where we live and claim the right to hold.
They must me laughing at our short sighted view,
For they know how temporary is all and we never knew.

This pause makes me name our home,
The Highlands View.
With a post script,
Treetops Too.
The Highlands View,
PS Treetops Too.
Is where I am going to live with a few.
A few people, a few years.
Then return to my real home,
And meet my maker, the builder of the real home.

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  • Joie Schmidt on Sep 22, 2010

    Wonderful! You have an extraordinary gift for writing – looking forward to reading more of your work!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • Govind Joshi on Sep 24, 2010

    Thanks, Joie.

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