Another poem for my series on poetry for school topics. This one tells of the Industrial Revolution in Britain during the eighteenth and nineteenth centuries, showing the dreadful conditions in which young children had to work to survive.

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The horrors of childhood in Britain grew

As the growth in industry changed their lives,

With the tiniest of children being sent to work

To earn a crust so they could survive.

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They spent long hours on factory floors

Where cold and danger always lurked,

With home a hellish, crowded hovel

For battered souls so overworked.

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While thousands more toiled underground

Forced into shafts of choking gloom.

Crippled backs hauled huge coal baskets

With no escape from the earthy tomb.

Orphans from the local workhouse

Spent endless days at mill machines,

Treated like the dirt they stood on

By owners who had cotton to glean.


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Tiny boys were forced up chimneys

Into spaces where they could barely move,

With soot in lungs and fear and hunger,

And no sign that their lives would improve.

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It took many years for the laws to pass

Which stopped this dreadful exploitation,

So children could be given the respect deserved

So far not show by this great nation.

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Christine Ramsay 17.1.11

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  • webseowriters on Jan 17, 2011

    Very interesting

  • Betty Carew on Jan 17, 2011

    Sad but wonderful descriptive words to explain the hardships that took place. Excellent poem Christine. It is hard to imagine today that children were used like this but then again there are parts of the world where child labour still continues. Wonderful poetry as always Christine

  • Agasthya on Jan 17, 2011

    Really sad that small kids working in factories due to poverty. The kids are deprived of their rights to education. No proper food and shelter.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jan 17, 2011

    Children shouldn’t with treated in such a cruel manner. They need a freedom to develop their skills.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jan 17, 2011

    Children shouldn’t be treated with such a cruel manner. They need a freedom to develop their skills.

  • Stable on Jan 17, 2011

    I can remember learning about this at school many years ago. It is something that has stuck with me. Another excellent poem Christine

  • J M Lennox on Jan 17, 2011

    It never ceases to amaze me how badly people can treat each other, and especially children. This is a wonderfully written poem about the Industrial Revolution, explaining how it affected many children.

  • Starpisces on Jan 17, 2011

    very well written poem, but I feel heart pain when I read on, I cannot take it when seeing or hearing about the suffering of children especially, I always tell my friends not to send me email articles relating to children sufferings as I will be very upset.

  • guraynsj on Jan 17, 2011

    Sorrowfully…

  • Atanacio on Jan 17, 2011

    This is gut-wrenching– true horros indeed :( Even that old saying couldn’t apply here– sacrifice a few to comfort many… thanks for thare :)

  • SowmyaT on Jan 17, 2011

    interesting post

  • mtrguanlao on Jan 17, 2011

    Sad to say,child labor do exist not only in one country but I think it’s worldwide. Children have the right to enjoy their childhood life. I love the poem Miss Christine,thanks for sharing this.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jan 17, 2011

    A great shout for those unfortunate souls madam. Keep it up.

  • JoeLopy on Jan 17, 2011

    Thank you Christine. Perhaps In some places, on this beautiful earth some of these stories are not just in the past………….Nowadays we live in a global society where we should learn from the mistake of the past and create a better future for our children……….this should be valid for the entire humanity not only for the people of certain geographical places…………………..Thanks a lot for this. Take care.

  • AnglaHodge on Jan 17, 2011

    Beautifully penned. Moving post.

  • Julie McMurchie on Jan 17, 2011

    Well done. Your words are moving pictures in this poem. Thank God for child labor laws.

  • deedaG50 on Jan 17, 2011

    Thanks Christine. Child Labour is still very much around. In some parts of the world, children are made to work like slaves, international laws not withstanding.

  • Ukrainian on Jan 17, 2011

    One more great poem that should be included in childrens\’ text-books.

  • LadyElena on Jan 17, 2011

    Nice Poem, but so sad – I didnt know this happened in Britain. I thought it was other Countries. Its good that a Law has been passed to eradicate the problem.

  • Suni51 on Jan 17, 2011

    I like your poem and more so as we are true followers of Brits and this is no exception.Cheers.

  • Kate Smedley on Jan 17, 2011

    It’s difficult to imagine how this would have been isn’t it – you’ve expressed it so well as always Christine. Thank goodness we’ve moved on from this.

  • Wizard Brown on Jan 17, 2011

    Great poem on a very important topic that is still a problem in many countries to this day

  • Poetic Enigma on Jan 17, 2011

    This is a great write, so descriptive and well composed

  • Val Mills on Jan 17, 2011

    Excellent write, Christine. It seems a while since we’ve seen one of your history stories.

  • sunsetsunrise on Jan 17, 2011

    Wow this is such a sensitive issuel Good work!

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 17, 2011

    Christine, It was the same in the U.S at that time. It was a horrible situation and the only way for families to survive.

  • PR Mace on Jan 17, 2011

    How horrible.

  • Eunice Tan on Jan 17, 2011

    Poor Children. Whose fault is this.

  • Phoenix Montoya on Jan 18, 2011

    This breaks my heart. Children are the future, they must be treasured. How I wish that there will be more protection for them.

  • crisdiwata on Jan 18, 2011

    Children should have given the protection they need. It breaks my heart to see children in the streets who instead of going to school are peddling or worse begging.

  • CHIPMUNK on Jan 18, 2011

    great share

  • CA Johnson on Jan 18, 2011

    This is very interesting. It is a shame that these children had to endure that kind of labor. It is sad that they won’t be able to have a childhood because they are forced to work at early ages.

  • gvgatchalian on Jan 18, 2011

    This is a very well-written poem, very significant too. It was able to paint us a clearer picture of the travails of the children in labor. Great work!

  • lonelyplanet on Jan 19, 2011

    Child labour is a black spot on society. Nice share.

  • athena goodlight on Jan 19, 2011

    It is indeed heart-wrenching. Children have the right to enjoy their childhood. Sad to say, child labor is still rampant in many countries especially in the 3rd world countries in Asia and Africa. A great poem!

  • Sharif Ishnin on Jan 19, 2011

    Excellent post Christine. Child labor unfortunately still exist in certain countries. This is a great reminder to what had happened and what is still happening.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 19, 2011

    It is unfortunate that there is still so much abuse of children through child labour around the world. thank you so much for your comments.

    Christine

  • shakugan123 on Jan 19, 2011

    how cruel they are, I hope child labor will be stopped forever.

  • Saxenadhi on Jan 20, 2011

    child labor is so cruel, wish we could all do something for them

  • Brewed Coffee on Jan 20, 2011

    Those poor children. No child deserves such treatment. But child labor is still existent in these days and that is just so sad.

  • mark ramsay on Jan 20, 2011

    You can tell you were a teacher. This is a real history lesson.

  • S A JOHNSON on Jan 20, 2011

    It’s terrible what the children had to go through so long ago.

  • Sharpedon on Jan 21, 2011

    Excellent poem, so heartfelt and heartbreaking and ; a
    poetic denouncement.
    So Great Britain’s past is Asia’s present I guess.
    We still have a long way to go…

  • magicdarts on Jan 25, 2011

    so appalling to think that child explotation still continues to this day for the sake of cheap “fashionable” clothing and the like – very moving piece

  • tonywriter on Jan 26, 2011

    yes I am strictly against any child labor,Thanks very well posting!

  • wonder on Feb 1, 2011

    This made me very sad. I cannot say anything else.

  • Lady Sunshine on Feb 2, 2011

    Your piece is aptly titled. A history lesson in rhyme.

  • Erin Miller on Feb 7, 2011

    This is amazing. You have written history as poetry. I really love this!

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