Poem about person where only E-mail contact is made–Where the dream is so perfect and the real could only damage the vision.

She stood alone in quaint Gazbo

Soft and sillohette

With the modest body of silver shadow

Of embroidered moonlight

And came on like a summer flower.

She wore a sun dress

Like a white-water fountain:

The vivid colors of see-thru visage

And orange.

Softly along her thin, tender back–

You could see a long green-grass meadow,

Bluegrass in sound and hick,

Some remote place

Of Time and Space and Silence,

Fresh and firm like stallions

And hear in Spring

The small yellow flowers sing

Smell to ear in honeysuckle thought.

Gentle white clouds hold up the blue sky

And in the dangling distance–

You could see black and white mountains–

Plenty of mountains!

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  • willie wondka on Jun 4, 2010

    beautifully written, nice to see you. sandie xx

  • Preston Carew on Jun 18, 2010

    B-E-A-UTIFUL, friend. Well done, write more please! Love white-water fountain.

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