The way he makes me feel while I watch him.

watching him

his smile

his big round eyes

hearing his laugh

seeing him happy

as he plays with his toys and looking at the world so intensely

the way he moves around the floor one arm one foot

everything to him is amazing, the feel of the carpet, the taste of a new food

he babbles to himself and giggles

he brings happiness to my life

he is my joy, he is my heart my soul my world

he is my son

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  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 9, 2009

    He is so beautiful. I feel that way about my gorgeous little grandson. A beautiful poem. Well done.

    Christine

  • Star Dust on Mar 10, 2009

    Glad to have a chance to meet with your beautiful son! He is so cute and so darling. This is a great piece of work plus the photo, it makes it better while seeing his smiley face and reading your poem. Thanks,

  • Jeffrey B. Merrow on Mar 10, 2009

    hi we have a common bond as your writting reflects your great and keep up the good work check out my articles namely my son and grandpa and harley add me as a friend and if i can help you feel free to ask god bless

  • Morgana on Mar 10, 2009

    Children bring so much joy to our lives.Any ordinary little thing can be an adventure for them, they can find joy and friends even in the ugliest toys and places lol Your son is beautiful, God bless him.

  • Tate morgan on Mar 12, 2009

    Pretty Boy

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