The fair has arrived in our town and the sight of it brought back lots of memories of the pleasures it gave us as children when the fair made it’s annual visit to our town.

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The fairground has appeared once more

In windswept fields beneath the sun.

And as I watched my childhood flashed

Of long gone rides and endless fun.

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How we loved to spend an afternoon

On the big wheel towering up above,

And clambering into dodgem cars

To crash with zeal into ones we loved.

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The goldfish trapped in tiny bags

Awaited fate as balls were tossed

At coconuts stuck down on stands,

Which meant great hopes were often lost.

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And the carousel where children rode

And organ music blared out loud,

Bright painted horses galloped by

Drawing curious eyes out from the crowd.

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In the distance a ghost train called

To those whose hearts beat loud with fear.

Bony skeletons and haunted faces

Would bring forth shrieks and oft a tear.

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Stalls where tempting treats were spread

And candy floss wound on a stick

Would soon attract the revellers

Causing many of them their lips to lick

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The octopus, waltzer and astra glides

Brought glorious fun to all who rode

Now these pleasures from so long ago

Are once again on us bestowed.

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Christine Ramsay  10.10.10

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  • Ubel Ein on Oct 10, 2010

    Your poetry is amazing. You’re excellent.

  • adeluv69 on Oct 10, 2010

    I love that sight. Good share friend.

  • Ubel Ein on Oct 10, 2010

    Everything you write is such a joy to read!

  • JoeLopy on Oct 10, 2010

    Refreshing literature. I love it.

  • Sangeeta Chaudhary on Oct 10, 2010

    Welcome back. It was such a delight reading this poem and recollecting my childhood days.

  • wonder on Oct 10, 2010

    You poem is nostalgic, a very colourful memory brought back.
    An excellent poem with a collage of fun.

  • Noeal V on Oct 10, 2010

    A very nice poem.

  • Melody SJAL on Oct 10, 2010

    Very descriptive, thanks for sharing.

  • GodsGrace on Oct 10, 2010

    Nice POem

  • Glynis Smy on Oct 10, 2010

    You made me feel young again, Christine. Thank you! Wonderful.

  • Phoenix Montoya on Oct 10, 2010

    A refreshing read ma’am. Remembering my childhood too. Thank you.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Oct 10, 2010

    Hi Christine, reading your work always makes my day complete…

  • Starpisces on Oct 10, 2010

    I want to go for the rides again, want to join me?
    very lovely poem.

  • J M Lennox on Oct 10, 2010

    Delightful. Thank you for the walk down memory lane. You have such a gifted pen.

  • carissimi on Oct 10, 2010

    enjoyed your post.. have a wonderful weekend!

  • joyhyena29 on Oct 10, 2010

    very nice^^

  • jimbob1 on Oct 10, 2010

    CR…thank yu for the incredible imagery you have painted once again through your masterful magical way with words…like so many others, I too, have been transported back to the distant days of my youth when the midway, sideshows, the smell of fair food concessions and the excitement of the grandstand entertainment became to anticipated object of summer excitement…I voted I Like It…I can’t believe that all of your many readers don’t vote…sorry I just don’t understand…thanks again fo sharing your amazing ability and terrific talent…

  • lindalulu on Oct 10, 2010

    Nice one Christine! I love the food…lol…

  • Dr.Simran Kaur1 on Oct 10, 2010

    good poem

  • Guy Hogan on Oct 10, 2010

    I haven’t been to a fair in ages. Actually, the last one I went to was when I was a kid and I got lost. But everything turned out fine in the end.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 10, 2010

    Fair was definitely a fun way to enjoy time. It brought excitement.

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 10, 2010

    The imagery is excellent. It brings back memories of my childhood days. I still love enjoy riding on the ferris wheel and the hunted houses. A child at heart.

  • katrinasui on Oct 10, 2010

    Nice Poem.

  • pearl2010 on Oct 10, 2010

    Very nice poem and enjoyable picture. Thanks for this Christine.

  • Mr Ghaz on Oct 10, 2010

    Nice entry as always. really enjoyed it. thanks Christine :)

  • ashucharu on Oct 10, 2010

    nice one

  • Trσσpєr on Oct 10, 2010

    Good share, Cheers!

  • Adrn0919 on Oct 10, 2010

    Your descriptive poem had me standing with you in the fairgrounds. Thank you for sharing the memories and nicely written.

  • zoeyclark on Oct 10, 2010

    I do like a good fair. Good poem, Christine.

  • amanda casey on Oct 10, 2010

    Excellent poem! I never tire of reading your poetry!

  • J Anderson on Oct 10, 2010

    Very Nice Post.

  • Saurav Banerjee on Oct 10, 2010

    Welcome back. Fairs always act as a reminder to our childhood days. Please also comment on my articles.

  • Val Mills on Oct 10, 2010

    Wonderful trip down memory lane. You know, the fair just doesn’t feel as glamorous these days and everything is so expensive. Maybe we see the reality through adult eyes. Hope the kids are still excited by it.

  • Judy Sheldon on Oct 10, 2010

    Great memories are recalled when reading this. Thanks!

  • Tulan on Oct 10, 2010

    Christine, I think the fair brings out the child in all of us.

  • giftarist on Oct 10, 2010

    That made me remember my father. :)

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 10, 2010

    Christine, you take me right back, My granddaughter went to the fair last week and she loves it, too.

  • Likha on Oct 10, 2010

    Fairs remind me so much of my happy childhood. So I’m passing on its joys to my children now. Thanks bringing us down memory lane.

  • My World on Oct 10, 2010

    Nice Post………

    thanks for share.

  • Eunice Tan on Oct 10, 2010

    Thanks for sharing the joy.

  • papaleng on Oct 11, 2010

    very descriptive one as if I was there at the fair.

  • Brewed Coffee on Oct 11, 2010

    It is really such a joy, specially when with good friends. It’s fun, so much to see and enjoy. Lovely poem Christine!

  • Rehoboth on Oct 11, 2010

    $- nice-$

  • addjust on Oct 11, 2010

    beautiful

  • Atanacio on Oct 11, 2010

    as always a very nice share :)

  • Baijayanti Pradhan on Oct 11, 2010

    lovely….
    Please go through my poem ‘You make me.’

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Oct 11, 2010

    A lovely poem, distinctive as usual.

  • CA Johnson on Oct 11, 2010

    I enjoyed your poem. I just went to a fair when my family and me went to VA. It was so much fun even though I did not win anything.

  • 1Mind on Oct 12, 2010

    Yet another great poem to add to your collection of works.

  • miraj on Oct 12, 2010

    God, you can definitely write about anything,ma’am.

    That’s not a quality everyone has.

    This was something like down memory lane.

    enjoyed it very much.

  • Sharif Ishnin on Oct 12, 2010

    Always fun to be at a fair. Always a joyful post Christine.

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 12, 2010

    So glad this brought back memeories you as well. Thank you so much for your lovely comments

    Christine

  • cmanjuc on Oct 13, 2010

    Takes me to my childhood, thanks

  • Bloom Again on Oct 14, 2010

    A wonderful poem that perfectly captures the joy of going to the fair.

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Oct 18, 2010

    Awesome poem, and oh how it did bring back so many memories.

  • 1hopefulman on Oct 20, 2010

    Reminded me of my own childhood and the fun we had.

  • AFHodge on Oct 21, 2010

    The comments are wonderful because we all went to the fair. How impelling and delightful1 Thank you for sharing. I just love it.

  • yes me on Oct 21, 2010

    Another lovely post cheers

  • johnnydod on Oct 21, 2010

    We are all kids at heart.. good one Christine

  • johnnydod on Oct 21, 2010

    We are all kids at heart good one Christine

  • mark ramsay on Oct 22, 2010

    I always loved the fair when I was a kid. I liked this poem.

  • Ask Cash on Oct 25, 2010

    I wish I could be there. The description is beautiful

  • Jacques Berkeley on Dec 6, 2011

    Excellent!

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