Lover’s responding to each other, with feelings that become so intense they share a moment of pure feeling, and through this, becoming wise to the realization that they were meant for each other.

There is a gnawing deep inside.

When I look at you I want to ride.

In your arms I must abide.

We can let our bodies be our guide.

Your walk and the way you glide

proves your expertise,

 in which you take a lot of pride

and that cannot be denied.

You give me the look and I meet your stride.

For you, my gates are open wide

and we show our love

with every touch,

and every slide.

We put everything out on the table

with nothing between us to hide.

Forever together we are tied.

The feelings between us became so intense

that we held each other and cried.

We laid back in each other’s arms

and began to chatter anxiously

about the day in which

I would become your bride.

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  • jimbob1 on Mar 15, 2010

    DB…That is quite the progression from lust to lover to bride…interesting how you wove all those relatonal aspects together…very well done. To say that I liked it would be a lie, because I loved it!!!

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