A word play on the subject of a kiss. Note: each final word is used twice.

Imagine streams
Of golden dreams
Much more there it seems
A promise that gleams
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Imagine eyes
Rich with surprise
Much more than mere dreams
This land fraught with sighs
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Add on a heart
Racing in streams
Through lands of surprise
Where love has its start
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Finally kiss
Paradise gleams
Reality sighs
While love claims their heart
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And so it seems
It had its start
A dream of a kiss
Deep within her eyes

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  • Kristie Claar on Aug 21, 2012

    Excellent

  • LCM Linda on Aug 21, 2012

    Beautifully written and interesting word play.

  • norlaw on Aug 21, 2012

    Very good

  • Lynn Hollis on Aug 21, 2012

    Nicely done.

  • lovebytes on Aug 21, 2012

    You captured the emotions really well.

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 21, 2012

    Well done, I like it.

  • smokychristine on Aug 21, 2012

    Very nicely expressed.

  • Kai Vicky on Aug 22, 2012

    nice poem indeed.

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Aug 22, 2012

    Beautiful =)

  • lapasan on Aug 22, 2012

    Sweet kiss.

  • girishpuri on Aug 22, 2012

    beautiful

  • Donnah Clark on Aug 22, 2012

    sweet!

  • JCEvangelista on Aug 22, 2012

    Awesome Job Martin!

  • lauralu on Aug 22, 2012

    Wonderful!

  • Derdriu on Aug 22, 2012

    Martin, It’s particularly your attention to impact, sound, and structure that I admire and which comes out so wonderfully well in your expert forays into the repetitive poetic formats such as my favorite pantoums, rondeaus, sestinas, and villanelles.
    Respectfully, and with many thanks for such a very, very lilting, lovely, lyrical poem, Derdriu

  • Paul Kurt on Aug 22, 2012

    Martin another great peice of work look forward to the next your verse is in tact and worth the read.

  • Robin Harkey Dixon on Aug 22, 2012

    Once again you bring an old theme new life. Beautiful, Martin!

  • papaleng on Aug 23, 2012

    good words chosen and the rhyme is simply nice. Another relaxing read.

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