A language lesson one afternoon in Seoul.

The language in your voice

It was your fingers I noticed first—
long and thick
with nails painted burning red,
tapping the rim of your coffee cup.
Lost in the drone of another Seoul
afternoon—
flipping through pages
of a dog-eared language book
words and phrases
highlighted pink and yellow;
listening to my language tripping

over your tongue

vowels and consonants accentuated
with aspirated strain.
It was your smile I noticed last—
when you looked up
from your book,
running the tip of your tongue
across moist
dark red lips.
“Finished.”

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Comments (5)
  • Kate Smedley on Apr 2, 2009

    You have a lovely way with words, lovely imagery here, very evocative. I also like the way you have separated ‘over your tongue’, it works well. Great poem.

  • Dee Gold on Apr 2, 2009

    I love the title.Nice piece.

  • Fresh Writing on Apr 2, 2009

    Very flowing and enjoyable from start to finish-very “evocative,” as Kate says.

    Keep up the good work!

    -Fresh Writing

  • clay hurtubise on Apr 3, 2009

    Nice work. Are you enjoying Seoul overall?
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • CutestPrincess on Apr 6, 2009

    Very nicely done, again. Keep up the excellent writing!

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