The Last Time

Darla Cooke on Mar 17, 2009

Tags: broken heart, friendship, last time, poem, Poetry

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The end of a friendship.

The last time I saw you,

I wanted to hold you tight.

Instead we began to argue.

You started an awful fight.

Terrible things were said.

Angry words were spoken.

That day you broke my heart.

Our friendship is now broken.

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Michael Degenhardt on Mar 17, 2009
Such an easy thing to happen,which too is a sad thing. Terrific rhyme and flow to this sad piece. Michael
Nadir on Mar 17, 2009
Why, o, why ? We build only to break?
Do we lack honesty,integrity
We do not know what is at steak?
Why o, why we leave it so late?
Were we ever in Love?
I wonder
Why for ever closer did we not grow?.
Joni Keith on Mar 17, 2009
Isn’t it terrible when the last words you shared were harsh? Nice poem.
rajeev bhargava on Mar 17, 2009
a beautifully written poem. it’s so true and shows how frail relationships can be when they go off track.
kate smedley on Mar 17, 2009
You expressed a lot in a few words.
CutestPrincess on Mar 17, 2009
nice poem…
kns1992 on Mar 17, 2009
Great poem! =]
vim3 on Mar 18, 2009
Nice poem…very emotional.
LOVELYHONEY on Mar 18, 2009
its sad,
its bad,
life is too short,
to break,
go ahead
and now i request,
amends
do make

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