http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/ Fri, 01 Jun 2012 12:23:55 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/comment-page-1/#comment-1065893 rizzei Fri, 18 Dec 2009 14:48:44 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/#comment-1065893 yeah there was a nice twist..liked it^^ yeah there was a nice twist..liked it^^

]]> http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/comment-page-1/#comment-1024779 diamondpoet Tue, 24 Nov 2009 16:16:38 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/#comment-1024779 This started out good ended tragic and flowed all the way through. Good job. This started out good ended tragic and flowed all the way through. Good job.

]]> http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/comment-page-1/#comment-1017823 Peter Cimino Fri, 20 Nov 2009 21:38:56 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/#comment-1017823 Awesome work. Awesome work.

]]> http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/comment-page-1/#comment-1009307 Raja Mon, 16 Nov 2009 05:17:15 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/#comment-1009307 Very good rhyme. I like it. Thank you for commenting on my article too. Very good rhyme. I like it. Thank you for commenting on my article too.

]]> http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/comment-page-1/#comment-1006190 Sukhdarshan Sat, 14 Nov 2009 12:28:26 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/#comment-1006190 "GOOD THING IT WAS A DREAM"...it was a good read...all the best.. “GOOD THING IT WAS A DREAM”…it was a good read…all the best..

]]> http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/comment-page-1/#comment-1005422 AlmaG Fri, 13 Nov 2009 23:26:11 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/#comment-1005422 Playing with my mind... hehehe yea you got me there ^_^ Playing with my mind… hehehe yea you got me there ^_^

]]> http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/comment-page-1/#comment-1005218 ceegirl Fri, 13 Nov 2009 20:13:50 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/#comment-1005218 Wow,very funny you had me for awhile. Wow,very funny you had me for awhile.

]]> http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/comment-page-1/#comment-1005172 sunshine926 Fri, 13 Nov 2009 19:35:18 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-lie-5/#comment-1005172 This is an awesome piece... wow! Yeah you had me there for a minute convinced that you were in jail for sleeping around with a 15 year old. thank god it was a dream. I was getting ready to bail you out. lol. well done. This is an awesome piece… wow! Yeah you had me there for a minute convinced that you were in jail for sleeping around with a 15 year old. thank god it was a dream. I was getting ready to bail you out. lol. well done.

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