Thoughts Near the End of the Road.

Black asphalt, wet and glistening,

the scent of passing rain and oil;

boot heels clicking on the hard surface

as he strides toward the light.

Warrior, wanderer, poet, pawn

determined to finish this; better

than it started, all those years ago;

he travels toward the end.

Wisdom lacking, he of instinct bound;

delights in the simpleness of it,

a final journey in a life of them

toward the unknown horizon.

And on this path, considering all

he vows; never to be broken.

His spirit flies with the eagles

as he suffers the indignity of existence.

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  • Guy Hogan on Dec 7, 2010

    You may have just written your best poem. Or to be more exact, the poem of yours that I like the best. Bravo!

  • bigpapadan on Dec 7, 2010

    Wow, thank you. Considering my admiration of your work, I am truly grateful.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Dec 7, 2010

    I am lost for words. Should I just say…beautiful?

  • bigpapadan on Dec 7, 2010

    Thanks Jimmy.

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