Remembrance.

I find his smile in yours.
A remembrance of so long ago.
A time when the world stopped existing.
When forever was here and now.
Completeness.
You could never know how you affect me.
But how could you?
This secret is mine alone.
Like the touch of your hand,
how I tremble inside.
How the light in your eyes amplifies my adoration.
I have loved you before.
I always will.
You still own that piece of me.
I stand before you,
a servant of your will.
For what you have given me is priceless.
The irreplaceable gift;
of his smile.

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  • dmccusker11 on Jun 11, 2009

    i liked this alot..great poem

  • Lostash on Jun 11, 2009

    And this has lit up my PC tonight!

  • ken bultman on Jun 11, 2009

    Let a smile be your umbrella. Beware of the umbrella that gives way to the winds of uncertainty.

  • barreto on Jun 11, 2009

    passionate and full of meaning…i love that…my post is dedicated to you..i hope you like it…

  • QuinMonty86 on Jun 11, 2009

    Awww, that is just so great. I really like this Sheila.

  • richard reed on Jun 11, 2009

    your writes are always beautiful, this is another treasure..stay blessed my friend…your fan Rich

  • Paul Roberts on Jun 11, 2009

    Is the secret a child, unknow to the originator of the smile? Friend fan smile.

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Jun 11, 2009

    Another nice creation indeed

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 11, 2009

    A description with a notable expression. You brought the poem to LIVE. Give u “like it”

  • exora2009 on Jun 11, 2009

    lively,great,loved it

  • kate smedley on Jun 12, 2009

    Beautiful and heartwarming poem Sheila, nicely written as always.

  • papaleng on Jun 12, 2009

    a very clever poem,

  • Princess Dre on Jun 12, 2009

    very nice and sincere…another lovely one – God Bless friend – Princess

  • irishpen on Jun 13, 2009

    Very lovely! Touching.

    ~peace~

  • leylucs on Jun 14, 2009

    wow nice poem!

  • CutestPrincess on Jun 14, 2009

    very sweet and touching poem…

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