Dancing at a club and the feeling of every amazing emotion being snatched away from you.

The lights swirl around
A beat lifts me
Endless crowd dancing
My body’s moving

My core rustling
The ground shaking
Strange faces around
Picture taking

Take another sip
Clutching my drink
Dance to the rhythm
Receive a wink

Grinding up on him
My instincts wild
Loving how this feels
No more a child

The music quiets down
Crowd dissolves
Leaving unsatisfied
Through a packed hall

Out all alone on the street
Once again feeling incomplete

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  • Georgina on Nov 12, 2007

    It’s different, but I liked it. The ending was a bit surprising, but it was nice.

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