This is a poem I made in school. Please comment and tell me your interpretation and any suggestions, etc. It’s about a dream where this orphan looks down and sees the world as a shadow and she’s debating if running away was a good thing, then she grows confident in herself and she looks down and sees the world full of color. This is a magazine poem (a poem made from magazine clippings) so I tried hard to make it flow and clear.
In the air,
Thinking
Is this a dream?
She’s dancing with the stars up there.
She looks down,
All she sees is a shadow.
A shadow going worldwide.
She remember,
She’s a orphan now.
She smells smoke, she remembers
What had happened that night.
The scariest night of her life.s
It’s over now.
She’s in the market now.
Everyone is trying to find her.
A girl, that escaped.
Maybe shouldn’t have though.
Everyone knows, including herself
That she’s the
Ugly truth.
They want to seal that and hide it.
She took too many drastic measures for nothing to get here.
No, she was right to run away.
She’s going to start right.
Reverse the damage of her soul.
Why was she even engaged in the first place?
She’s not now though.
She looks down again and sees
The colors of life.
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