Loved ones are amazing when you really take a look with your heart.

Receding hairline, scared up hands from hard labor,

Not a day goes by he doesn’t wonder,

Yet the child locked deep inside wants to play

Boats, trains, motorcycles, remote control cars,

the toys he dreams of having one day.

While he works at this job in the day.

His nights are spent in the playground of his dreams,

Camping, hiking, horseback riding, fun and games,

Quicklly the time goes by time to face a new day,

Yet passing through all these windows

Hollow dreams of reality seep in to remind him of the daily routines,

Responsibilities, family friends, bills, insurance,

house payments, college funds, food, etc.

As he labors hard, a smile comes upon his face

Trade this life of hard times and broken dreams

She smiles at him; he embraces it and a thousand times more

Massaging those sore muscles to comfort him

As he falls asleep in the comfort of his bedroom

The dreams of all the toys come back to those days

When worries were less troublesome.

Playing hard, while becoming the man.

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  • Lucas Aholelei on Apr 13, 2011

    As real as it seems the only time the weight is lifted is when our dreams of pleasure kill our self esteems as soon as our eyes open.. love u mom hope my brother doesent suffer to much.

  • hfj on Apr 18, 2011

    I really liked this story of how our hopes and dreams are put on hold for what comes first in every man’s life, family and responsibility. Well done friend.

  • yes me on Apr 25, 2011

    I liked this… [A foot note from another me, Keep your dreams,
    It's reality that shocks ] cheers

  • Ambi2010 on May 9, 2011

    Very nice post.

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