Distressing sounds coming from a pier overlying the water, with a wind that roars as it hits the shore and pier, very unhappy, very lonely.

Image by mikebaird via Flickr

 

Image by mikebaird via Flickr

Quiet, do you hear?

The wind blowing over the lonesome pier.

The waves crack at the shore,

and all the shells galore.

Shoes in hand,

with toes squishing in the sand.

The lonesome wind blows through my hair,

seeming to hug each strand with care.

Up ahead I see the pier.

The same one  that I see every year.

I have always wanted to take a walk

down its winding curves,

but every time I try

I am nothing more than a bundle of nerves.

This time I am going to do it.

Water gushes over the pier floor.

As I walk further down

I can hear the waves roar.

I am a bit shaken, but do continue

until I reach the very end,

right into the whipping wind.

How exciting, yet scary.

The waves are getting kind of hairy.

I feel empowered,

having succeeded in this feat -

each time the waves crack and then repeat.

I turn back in high spirits,

for I am pleased that I got to share in it.

Maybe the next time the sound I hear

will be from a happy pier,

the sound of the whipping wind,

will be a peaceful friend,

and the waves cracking with their roar,

will be calm forever more.

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  • diamondpoet on Dec 11, 2009

    Great work and I love the imagery, thanks for sharing.

  • jimbob1 on Dec 12, 2009

    DB…This is a wonderful poem with great imagery. I can just visualize the walk along the beach heading for the pier being buffeted by the roar of the wind and the crashing of the waves. Somewhat terrifying, yet potentially very romantic. Enjoyed it a lot. Thanks.

  • Stan Wilson on Dec 12, 2009

    waves cracking with their roar, will be calm ever more…beautiful,oh the depth of such thoughts and beauty..love this work very much all the best for your successful future….

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