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The Lotus and The Moon Revisited

Lady Sunshine on Nov 4, 2009
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A midnight tryst once more.

An reenactment of The Lotus and the Moon.

Floating in a pond
Upon silken lily pads
Lying seductive

Her petals tremble
Anticipation quivers
Waiting in earnest

Across the black sky
His pale light shimmering
Descending slowly

Tumbling moonbeam
Caressing shaking petals
Embracing her soft

A velvety touch
A gentle, lingering stroke
Pleasure in the night

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  • Papa Sparks on Nov 4, 2009

    This was awesome Julie. You are such a good writer and I beg you to join Notes & Grace Notes today and submit this poem.

  • raman13 on Nov 4, 2009

    excellent

  • Themax on Nov 4, 2009

    Just beautiful,Thanks for sharing :)

  • Shirley Shuler on Nov 4, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, beautiful, I agree with Papa Sparks!

  • Teves on Nov 4, 2009

    Well done sunshine. Nice photo.

  • ken bultman on Nov 4, 2009

    Oh, my. The juices are flowing. How wonderful.

  • giftarist on Nov 5, 2009

    Wonderful piece, I like it!

  • Jane Jane on Nov 5, 2009

    wonderful as they say. And a great graphic.

  • deep blue on Nov 7, 2009

    An entirely different genre of poetry. You are absolutely unpredictable lady. Your words cut like the edge of the samurai sword. Just don’t cut me off will you?

  • Marie Antoinette on Nov 11, 2009

    This is so beautiful, and such delicate piece of poetry.

  • Razorwind on Jan 11, 2011

    Your poems are so cool!

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