Love for some one.how strong it is..

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                                 My love,

My love for you is strong and relentless.

Nothing or no one can change that,

You take my breath every time I see you..

My love is strong no one can take that.

I would give you my last breath just to keep you,

Around, you have a special place, it started as,

A game then it turned into lust.

Then finally love, love to fill you by me..

My love for you is strong sometimes to strong..

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  • Themax on Nov 4, 2009

    Yes your Love is the most strongest world to enjoy,Keep it alive :)

  • Mean lean gangster on Nov 4, 2009

    How romantic!

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 4, 2009

    Lovely and romantic!

  • lillyrose on Nov 4, 2009

    So beautiful were your words!

  • Valerie Curtiss on Nov 4, 2009

    Excellent

  • alc on Nov 4, 2009

    I feel so special!

  • Teves on Nov 4, 2009

    Nice poem…

  • Emma Green on Nov 4, 2009

    A very romantic write.

  • Aiyanna on Nov 4, 2009

    Very Romantic and I am sure your lady will be tickled pink by this poem :D

  • Hansika on Nov 5, 2009

    Romantic poem..

  • kashish786 on Nov 6, 2009

    how romantic

  • Alexiandria M Michaels on Nov 14, 2009

    very nicely done

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