Poem of my love.

-For Dan

He greets me in the morning with the softest,

broadest smile;

Ready with my engulfing robe

he cloaks me for awhile.

His rough hand reaches out

to lead my day with prayer;

I hear how much he loves us,

how much he truly cares.

Breakfast he has made for me

from scraps he makes a treasure;

He sings goofy songs- making even

readying for work an instant pleasure.

He sends me off with a kiss

and lights the lantern to draw me home;

where we will commence to live our love

as an eternal poem.

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  • Audrey Howitt on Mar 8, 2011

    Your love for him shines through every line!!

  • bigpapadan on Mar 8, 2011

    Okay… this guy sounds waaaaay too good to be true… he must be some kind of whacko! I bet he even cooks dinner and cleans the house too huh??? LOL. I love this Kim, as I love you. Thank you soooo much for loving me.

  • Larry Fish on Mar 8, 2011

    Such a beautiful poem of love. It shines through your every word.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 8, 2011

    my best wishes
    to my and our good friend
    bigpapadan

  • thestickman on Mar 8, 2011

    Very nice :-)

  • djbtol on Mar 8, 2011

    I hope bigpapadan doesn’t get worn out!

  • CHIPMUNK on Mar 9, 2011

    great share well written

  • Nikita Phadke on Mar 9, 2011

    Oh I loved you poem,beautifully written and full of love! :)

  • anndavey650 on Mar 10, 2011

    Awww now that is lovely. You lucky lady.

  • serenitybubble on Mar 13, 2011

    Very cute poem!

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