A poetry!

The Adam-Eve creation;
The Monkey-Man evolution;
And the creation of mankind by Lord-
The greatest riddle still in the bud.

 



Seed from tree or tree from seed,
Egg from hen or hen from egg,
Man or mammal preceding the other –
Some confusing questions continuing to bother
The mankind as ever before.

Which precedes what and what succeeds the other?
Not been solved and not to be solved;
But emanates is the existence of Lord
Behind the creation of mankind, flower and mud.

He Who made the world,
Water, land and light
Gave to humankind fulfillment to the brim
Used by them to destruct and trim.

He created and constructed the world
For mankind, for peace
Used instead for blood and kill
The worst tribute to Him and His will.

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  • Angelji on Dec 27, 2011

    You are not just a a computer wiz ,you are also a great poet….Beautiful poem..

  • ImKarn23 on Dec 27, 2011

    nice poem!

  • aheed411 on Dec 27, 2011

    We did not exist but for God Almighty King

  • snowneo on Dec 27, 2011

    Fabulous!!

  • straw1979 on Dec 27, 2011

    nice like always

  • shelpeare on Dec 27, 2011

    Well it is all about Adam and not Atom. God created the chicken and the chicken laid the egg. He created the tree and the tree made the seed. It was not until Darwin came along in the 1800s that this was doubted by many people. I hear that he was supposed to get into pastoral ministry but didn’t. He ended up promoting stuff that led to doubts about God and creation. I guess he was monkeying around :)

  • Suni51 on Dec 27, 2011

    A rocking one, you too. Congrats.

  • Vivek Ratan on Dec 27, 2011

    love you ittechil
    really I love you
    with my gentle words
    literally I hug you
    your words are so sweet
    for that sweetness I touch you
    as you trust on me
    In the same way I trust you

    God says this with both of us,that is why our words come lovely

    Very nice poem,ittechil

  • megamatt09 on Dec 27, 2011

    Nice words.

  • Saurav Banerjee on Dec 27, 2011

    This world is a riddle. Great share.

  • shaqziad on Dec 27, 2011

    Agreed.

  • sanataryal on Dec 27, 2011

    ittechil, you composed a fantastic poetry about mankind . Interesting .

  • Saurav Banerjee on Dec 27, 2011

    Revisiting this article. Great one.

  • mtrguanlao on Dec 27, 2011

    So now you’re a poet! Good one!

  • lonelyplanet on Dec 28, 2011

    This world is a riddle. Great share.

  • xyz999 on Dec 28, 2011

    What’s not to love in this fantabulous romp of a read. Amazing work.

  • Yvhes P. on Dec 28, 2011

    wow that’s simply amazing =)

  • Kristie Claar on Dec 28, 2011

    great work

  • Martin Kloess on Dec 28, 2011

    good work.

  • anncash16 on Dec 28, 2011

    Great!

  • Anbuselvan on Dec 28, 2011

    good writing skill!

  • Audrey Howitt on Dec 28, 2011

    Nice job on this!! Gentle, gentle soul!

  • faizalhuda on Dec 28, 2011

    Good one.

  • mtrguanlao on Dec 28, 2011

    Interesting,thanks for the share.

  • HannanRKhan on Dec 29, 2011

    How do you make money with yostuff when they dont do bookmarking links anymore?

  • girishpuri on Dec 29, 2011

    very nice

  • yes me on Dec 29, 2011

    Nice job here cheers

  • papaleng on Dec 29, 2011

    Wow! you have a great talent in Poetry!

  • nurzaira on Dec 30, 2011

    beautiful poem about life and piece.. uya.. beautiful pict too

  • FX777222999 on Dec 31, 2011

    Nice and beautiful poem!

  • realityspeaks on Jan 5, 2012

    Beautiful

  • juliachild on Jan 21, 2012

    nice

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