This is undeniably another form of your gift of expression. Indeed consistent with Pygmallion and Galatea. Wonderful and full of feelings.
Shalom paisano.

your poems are like short stories they are so entertaining! Good job, Ruther!

brillaint piece ruther, front page for this one!

i enjoyed reading this, that’s right, it’ more like a short story

I think you’re a romantic guy. Your romantic heart depicted in your poem.

You are so sweet, love your work, lovely read enjoyed it.

Brilliant and original and thoroughly enjoyed this and the first part.

Absolutely spellbinding rutherfranc very creative.

An excellent piece – why are you stil writing for Triond? You should get this published!

..lh..rf 22222222222222 goooooooooooooood thats alll………..

hi ruth,

A fitting ending to a chilling storyline.the last gave a final punch it needed.

my deepest respect and gratitude,ruth
LOVE IS ALL

Walk in beauty change the world.

A worthy ending to part I – great stuff!

Good, it’s almost like a play – you can visualise it.

It doesn’t matter that either gave half their heart to the demon, their love will keep growing, and soon they won’t even notice the loss. A great ending to a stunning piece.

Totally awesome! You are quite a poet. The words are from deep down into your soul.

Oh my , oh my–whatta a beautiful lines you started here till the end…the lady of whom you’ve got ur eyes on might be enticed…whatta a lovely piece of poetry…

Rutherfranc speaks of his life so beautifully! Always very consistently full of expression from pain, to agony, to happiness and romance!
“did you gave”… pre, kilala mo naman ako pero I won’t say it like Drew.

Good work Ruther thanks

Lovely, I always loved the myth of pygmalion, so this modern version really speaks to me, even though I have a massive phobia of shop window dummies.
Shudders.

Romantic and beautiful — nicely done my friend!

Nice work, Keep it up.

awesome write, awesome!!

oooooohhhhhhh… that was really nice! i loved it! so romantic and beautiful and touchy!

You always bring to us such wonderfully written work. This is amazing.

A true promising poet. Great job my friend.

I’m so glad you did a second part.It’s much nicer when the heart begins to beat again. If I loved the first one, I love this one more. Very beautiful

Nicely done, really enjoyed this.

really good read, dont know what else to say everyone else said ie all

waiting for No.3

Great post!

I was thrilled to see a sequel posted on your page so I couln’t click onto this fast enough! Good job- I love the tone of this saga!
cheers.
-Doug

very good and very morbid…just the way I like it.

So profound in expression and emotions. Loved the progression through vivid images.

Your poems are very enjoyable to keep reading again.. good work.

Very entertaining poem. I love the story of Pygmalion and Galatea of mythology. I also love your modern version of it. Great work.

A wonderful continuation to the first part of the poem, very well expressed; the emotions of the characters are displayed perfectly.

RF I can’t believe I missed this the first time around.