This is a poem I wrote about my maths teacher, I hope you like it.

he lets us pass making us tuck our shirts in on the way
He says a bad joke and the class laughs to keep him in a good mood
We stand behind our desks like soldiers on parade
We say good morning, sit and getting our homework
out like mindless machines
He turns on the projector and puts the homework on
before walking the isles like a security guard looking for the unknown noise
He checks our homework one by one stamping our diaries accordingly
He stands in front of my desk demanding my homework
I slip him my diary silently and quickly
He slams the stamp down hard
The stamp red with the blood of students who
haven’t done their homework
He travels to his desk like a bullet to its target
He fills out the slip and puts it on my desk
A DETENTION

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Comments (4)
  • acecampillo on Oct 19, 2008

    Nicely written. Great Job. I’m jealous of those who can write poems. I also write poems but not as good as others.

  • ebazaar on Oct 19, 2008

    Haha! This is fun. Is this an indirect confession to say that you hated maths so much. I was thinking that maybe you despise it so much that you actually resort to writing a poetry out of it. XD This is really good and expressive modern poetry.

  • mcleotg on Oct 19, 2008

    Thank you for your comments, I might even right some more poetry.

  • eddiego65 on Oct 20, 2008

    I think your math teacher may be a little bit strict. Anyway, I can see that you are more of the writing type than the solving type of person. In fact, this is a great poem! Very direct to the point.

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