The midnite invitation A cold midnite sexy invitation is declined.


The midnite invitation

 

 

You rang up

A short while ago

Calling out my name

I was asleep

Why what’s your game?

 

Why do you call me?

Every day at nite

Where do you want?

To meet me tonight

The winter in Canada

Is so very cold

It’s minus 21 today

That I’m told

 

We returned from dinner

Just an hour ago

I’m in bed do you not that know

Its bitter cold,

What can I do?

Why at this hour

Calleth you?

 

Come and warm me my love

It’s that what you want to say

No way, I’m comfy tonight 

It’s warm inside

Perhaps some other day

But certainly not today

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Stan Wilson on Jan 30, 2010

    when the weather is cool,
    and its too cold to woo,
    dont be a fool,
    go lay down you tool,

    very good poem here hahahahaha liked it very much..choice…

  • Sushant94 on Jan 30, 2010

    haha! good one! nice idea too!

  • albert1jemi on Jan 30, 2010

    great write

  • Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. on Jan 30, 2010

    I love making love when the weather’s cool, tsk, tsk, tsk, . . .here we go again, lovely honey.

  • Precious Illusions on Jan 30, 2010

    lol…very different poem form those i have read recently…but really enjoyed it.

  • Nitin Mudgal on Jan 30, 2010

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  • Mushtaq on Jan 30, 2010

    ha ha ha a very cold poem initially and warming at the end

  • devsir on Jan 30, 2010

    -21. So Cold. I am shivering. Nice Poem

  • standingproud on Jan 30, 2010

    O
    O
    O
    Oooooooo

  • giftarist on Jan 30, 2010

    lol, that’s great LH, never thought of it! :D

  • mkd1788 on Jan 30, 2010

    nice suggestion…interesting..

  • Videomark on Jan 30, 2010

    What, no late night rendezvous? This does not sound like you. lol

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 30, 2010

    thank u all

    ur all ARE AN INSPIRATION OF LOVE

    FOR A NEVER DYING SOUL
    LHLHLH

    GOD BLESS ALL MY READERS
    lhlhlh

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 30, 2010

    dev sir

    correction minus 31 degrees
    i think coldest here this year last year was more snow in canada

    and videomark
    you will have to make a live video

    from where i came was full of u know them all

    which one was it

    i couldn’t guess thats all

    for the rest
    THANK YOU ALL

    HOPE YOU ALL HAD

    A LOVELY BALL …..Lhlhlh

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 30, 2010

    dev sir

    correction minus 31 degrees
    i think coldest here this year last year was more snow in canada

    and videomark
    you will have to make a live video

    from where i came was full of u know them all

    which one was it

    i couldn\’t guess thats all

    for the rest
    THANK YOU ALL

    HOPE YOU ALL HAD

    A LOVELY BALL …..Lhlhlh

  • VTech on Jan 30, 2010

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  • 8Shei8 on Jan 30, 2010

    Funny one! That person should come out to see you :)

  • sambhafusia on Jan 31, 2010

    very funny and good…nice share

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 31, 2010

    THANKS TO YOU ALL FOR YOUR LOVELY CALL
    LHLHLH

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