Tell me how many beads there are
In a silver chain
Of evening rain,
Unravelled from the tumbling main,
And threading the eye of a yellow star: -
So many times do I love again…

THE MOMENT I WANT TO END MYSELF(lovely poem)

I’ll always remember

It was late afternoon

It lasted forever

And ended so soon

You were all by yourself

Staring up at a dark gray sky

I was changed

In places no one would find

All your feelings so deep inside (deep inside)

Was then that I realized

That forever was in your eyes

The moment that I saw you cry

cry..moment that I saw you cry

It was late in september

And I’ve seen you before (and you were)

You were always the cold one

But i was never that sure

You were all by yourself

Staring up at a dark gray sky

I was changed

In places no one would find

All your feelings so deep inside (deep inside)

Was then that I realized

That forever was in your eyes

The moment I saw you cry

I wanted to hold you

I wanted to make it go away

I wanted to know you

I wanted to make your everything, all right….

I’ll always remember…

It was late afternoon…

In places no one would find…

In places no one would find

All your feelings so deep inside (deep inside)

Was then that I realized

That forever was in your eyes

The moment I saw you cry

Baby cry!

The moment I saw you cry

Oh no, no, no

i think i saw you cry

I wanted to know you!

I wanted to hold you!…I love u badly

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Comments (5)
  • abah animasi on Mar 30, 2011

    The feeling from the inside will be very inviting beautiful words

  • Dreamy777 on Mar 31, 2011

    Great poem

  • roxxyboi on Mar 31, 2011

    @abah u r right man…..thats true and poetry is a name of the world of inside
    @dreamy777 thanx

  • Aiyanna on Apr 23, 2011

    The beauty and the emotion captured in the poem touched my heart…

    Judging from the words, he/she may have been very special to you and has moved on to another plane of existence…. From the picture I am guessing it is a child… My heart goes out to you and may you find peace and comfort in expressing yourself freely…

  • Wrath Warbone on May 9, 2011

    Very pasionate and emotionally intense.

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