The Moon, The Moon

LOVELYHONEY on Nov 26, 2009

A study of the Moon.

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The Moon, the Moon

The Moon has been well researched,

Now if one applies ones mind

People tend to behave like the Moon

So we say

On a full moon day

Lunatics behave

Lunatic ally mostly

That’s OK

But many other folks

Also behave like lunatics

There is much more

Than the eye beholds

Moon is just a passer by

In this universe as a whole

Give the ancients’ some credit

You will know

That the moon is not more

Than a satellite,

But we give it a status of a planet

Are we all not lunatic enough?

Please see and search your hearts

Then come and privately tell me

Perhaps you may all message me

The Moon the Moon

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Comments (8)

AlmaG on Nov 26, 2009
The moon is what guides us through the night
ceegirl on Nov 26, 2009
well written
drelayaraja on Nov 26, 2009
Nice one lovely. You change your profile picture. good.
Alexander Jay Sheridan on Nov 26, 2009
This is a very vague poem. You need to revise this poem. Describe how it circles the Earth and affects the Earth’s tides. Talk about the water that was found on the moon. Show me. Don’t tell me. This poem has great potential
Teves on Nov 26, 2009
Wonderful..
ssaunders on Nov 27, 2009
I liked this poem the moon is a beautiful thing even if we are all a bit looney.
wonder on Nov 27, 2009
A creative angle with a logic for not being driven to ecstacy. Poor poets!
Darla Cooke on Nov 27, 2009
Interesting poem.

Hi there!