This English Sonnet is strictly following the a-b-a-b, c-d-c-d, e-f-e-f, g-g rhyme scheme. I opted for tradition over contemporary (modern) sonnets to stick with the authentic feel of the whole concept.

This is the second part of the two-part poem I wrote.

The story of the Jackal and the Moon.

I am in search, life long, for my purpose.

In this vast space I dread to wait my turn.

I am the Moon lost for heart’s words and prose.

In time, I rise to shine, to glow, to burn.

I see you Jackal Prince, I say in thought,

Immersed in freedom, I cannot abide.

Incandescent I am but futile in cot.

I but cannot speak of my loss, my pride.

I lost that one compass of which you speak.

Immense leap of faith made me leave and find.

I have returned to none but bloody peak.

If prince then yearned, tell me, have I been blind?

Am I to shine, to glow, to burn, too late?

Is “I” can be too much come love and fate?

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  • EK Encarnacion on Mar 17, 2010

    somehow, i have this feeling I know what you are talking about. but a part of my brain says i’m too imaginative.

    nevertheless, you presented a well-written sonnet with the proper rhyming pattern. not sure, however, if this follows the meter. but knowing you, i’m sure it does.

  • Q Dionisio on Mar 17, 2010

    thanks for the comment ely.

    in poetry, it is what you think it is. ;)

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