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The most beautiful night of my life
I spent it in your arms
I loved the way you looked deep into my eyes
You helped me to find an inner peace
I thought that it was forever lost

You let me snuggle, a comforting cuddle
And never once did you complain
I loved the way you made me laugh
Like there was never a tomorrow

I treasure the way you touched me
Like I had never before been touched
The way you kissed me
Like I had never in my life been kissed

I felt safe the way you held onto me
Like I had never been held
Oh babe the way you made love to me
No other before you has ever come close

It was as if you were inside my mind
And satisfied every desire I ever had
I just want to thank you so much
For the most beautiful night of my life.

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  • Hanum on May 11, 2011

    Hmmm…so romantic. Well done :)

  • jrabraham on May 11, 2011

    nice one darlene20!

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on May 11, 2011

    lovely…

  • arifeen on May 11, 2011

    Nice:)

  • realityspeaks on May 13, 2011

    Beautifully expressed.

  • arielcnacion on May 14, 2011

    good to read that your recent articles are now all about the lighter side of life. now i see a darlene metamorphosizing. =)

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