I have a phobia about moths. I have tried to overcome it but to no avail. Even a picture of a moth has me trembling.


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The Moth

 

I have a most irrational fear,

Not one I can explain at all.

It’s a fear of moths, and now there’s one

High up on the bedroom wall.

 

I woke in the early hours

As the dawn chased the dark away,

And there it was right above me.

What a dreadful start to the day!

 

I turned over and tried to ignore it

But my heart was beating so fast.

I wanted to wake my hubby

As I have done in the past.

 

But I knew he would not be happy

To be dragged once again from his sleep,

Because of my thing about moths

Which is buried inside me so deep.

 

So I decided it was up to me

To deal with the problem alone.

The moth was quietly dozing

And the job I could not postpone.

 

I crept out of my bed quietly.

My slipper was the nearest thing at hand.

I threw it at the moth wildly,

Hoping in the vicinity it would land.

 

That was the worst thing to have done,

As the moth having had quite a scare,

Came hurtling directly at me

And fluttered around in my hair.

 

No longer feeling the need to be quiet

I let out the loudest of screams,

And thundered downstairs and slammed the door,

So Hubby was still dragged from his dreams.

 

Christine Ramsay

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  • ken bultman on Aug 18, 2009

    Poor you but poor hubby, too. I’m glad the slipper didn’t land on him. Incidentally, a very, very good poem.

  • Darla Cooke on Aug 18, 2009

    Interesting poem. :>)

  • Ramalingam on Aug 18, 2009

    This is quite poetic, but I think moth is a harmless insect and your fear and the disturbance caused to your husband etc, it seems rather unwarranted.Thanks for sharing.

  • Jenny Heart on Aug 18, 2009

    I enjoyed this mothy poem. Think of them as a baby butterfly. Poor things. LOL

  • ceegirl on Aug 18, 2009

    I am afraid of them to.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Aug 18, 2009

    This moth is not scary. I once encountered one big moth, which was indeed scary. Anyway, it was good that this moth gave you inspiration to compose this poem. Thanks and have my liked it.

  • Lady Sunshine on Aug 18, 2009

    Lol Christine. You made me smile. ^_^ Such an enjoyable piece, though not your fear. I myself am afraid of insects in general.

  • Hugo La Rosa on Aug 18, 2009

    After the scare, you must rethink the little fobia as something funny, which it is indeed. Regards, Hugo.

  • Phill Senters on Aug 18, 2009

    Poor Christine, lost your slipper and woke Hubby anyway.

  • Alicia Wind on Aug 18, 2009

    Lol..that was fun to read. keep writing…

  • clay hurtubise on Aug 18, 2009

    This, from such a beautiful butterfly!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • lindalulu on Aug 18, 2009

    Aww…..we all have something we fear. I must say moths from a distance are fine but when they come close I don’t like them either.

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 18, 2009

    I don’t mind moths but I’d rather not deal with bats.

  • PR Mace on Aug 18, 2009

    Nice poem. Moths don’t bother me but a spider, they scare me to death.

  • Melody SJAL on Aug 18, 2009

    You really have a flair for weaving a lovely tapestry of words from inconspicuous subjects, Christine. Very nice piece.

  • kathie107 on Aug 18, 2009

    Aw nice poem, Im sorry youre afraid of butterflies, but well done I liked it.

  • CA Johnson on Aug 18, 2009

    I really liked your poem. I don’t like moths either. They fly in my house and mosquitos do too.

  • giftarist on Aug 18, 2009

    Nice poem! Poor creatures,

  • Radhika Bhargava on Aug 18, 2009

    nice poetry…..I hate moths….

  • maranatha on Aug 19, 2009

    Poor Christine! I laughed, but only because my phobia for spiders is just as real. I solved it by killing them. I get downright aggressive about it… there are several spots on the ceiling that look like inkspots.

    It doesn’t take away the fear, but at least it’s more manageable and I don’t wake up hubby.

  • papaleng on Aug 19, 2009

    you really expressed your emotions Christine. Yes, even I am afraid of moths but not butterfly.

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 19, 2009

    Thank you all for your sympathy. I guess lots of us have phobias.

    Christine

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Aug 19, 2009

    I’m so glad I’m not afraid of insects or spiders; rats I don’t mind if they are pet-quality hand raised. But an o’possum on the county in the bleary-eyed morning…that will cause a shriek that can be heard in the next county!

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Aug 19, 2009

    on the counter, i mean. (these comments really should have an edit button.)

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Aug 20, 2009

    a light-hearted and well written piece

  • AngelaDavid on Aug 20, 2009

    I couldn’t help but gigle! I too don’t care to have moths around. Esp when I am asleep. So that part is not funny. Dealing with the hubby! ? That is certainly another fun poem!! thank you for sharing. Enjoyable.

  • Hazel Crowther on Aug 21, 2009

    Well done a good write. But I’m sorry you had to go through so much to be able to write it!

  • Poetic Enigma on Aug 23, 2009

    This is another well composed poem,
    Thanks for sharing!!

  • Kate Smedley on Aug 24, 2009

    Another lovely piece of work – I do know how you feel Christine and my dad collected moths for years, sends shudders down me thinking about it!

  • mark ramsay on Aug 28, 2009

    Ha ha! I know how you hate moths. A funny write.

  • CutestPrincess on Aug 31, 2009

    what a beautiful poem…

  • Luffy12 on Sep 2, 2009

    beautiful butterfly

  • Shawn O on Sep 10, 2009

    Very cute and funny. I enjoyed reading this poem. :)

  • razumtina on Oct 23, 2009

    Beautiful!!!!!

  • J M Lennox on Jan 20, 2011

    You were so brave too (at first). My daughter has a moth phobia also. Even though I do not – I am sympathetic, as I am for you. Wonderful poetry – as always! :-)

  • Jacques Berkeley on Dec 6, 2011

    Excellent!

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