He lacks rest when I do, as the Moon moves to west.


Credit – Marcus Vegas


Credit – joiseyshowaa  

It was a summer evening
And I went to the terrace of my building
To see the rising Moon
Even with the setting sun


Credit – prakhar

It was a summer midnight
In the open I decided to rest
Above in the sky was Moon
Now below the earth was sun


Credit – seeks2dream

Later in the morning I woke up
Looked for the Moon before I could pack up
For Moon there was no rest
Who moved all night to west

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  • rutherfranc on Feb 9, 2009

    very observant of you.. nice pics to go with the flow of your words

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 9, 2009

    Interesting subject.I like watching the moon in all its shapes and sizes.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 9, 2009

    Nice piece…

  • Liane Schmidt on Feb 9, 2009

    So nice… I love the addition of the pictures – - it gives the feeling of time changing… nice*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Stacey T Pollock on Feb 10, 2009

    Very interesting poem about the movement of the moon. The pictures also create a mood to go with it.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Feb 10, 2009

    nice poem,i love watching the moon

  • denus on Feb 15, 2009

    the moon is the bomb :D

  • BC Doan on Feb 16, 2009

    Love the photos, and how you have each verse underneath! Very creative..

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