A short piece which may inspire us as we face a new day.

The new day opens a door

Where a bright tomorrow peeps

Like the wide sandy shore

Where a precious shell sleeps

The new day carries a tune

A romantic song full of life

Like on the month of June

If someone becomes a wife

The new day brings a letter

Which everyone wants to read

Hoping that everything is better

may bring what we need

Image via Wikipedia

25
Liked it
Comments (24)
  • papaleng on May 12, 2009

    so sweet and light-hearted. nice job.

  • Betty Carew on May 12, 2009

    Dee this is an awesome poem I love it , what a wonderful job you did on this.

  • DA Cournean on May 12, 2009

    Quite inspiring Dee. I like it!

  • clay hurtubise on May 12, 2009

    Nice, upbeat piece.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • rutherfranc on May 12, 2009

    this was amazingly simple yet effective..

  • Momma Tells on May 13, 2009

    I would say you’re an optimist!

  • Stacey T Pollock on May 13, 2009

    Lovely!

  • Kate Smedley on May 13, 2009

    Lovely poem Dee, great way to start the day.

  • S A JOHNSON on May 13, 2009

    I really enjoyed this and I liked the song. Both combined for some reason tugged at my heart strings. I find it really amazing and great work.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on May 16, 2009

    so lovely and so sweet…inspirational as well

  • Mr Ghaz on May 17, 2009

    Wonderful!..That was lovely and well written poem..LOV it..Thanks for sharing this great stuff..nice pics too

  • berrynice on May 17, 2009

    Sweet, light-hearted and well-written. What more could we ask for?

  • CHAN LEE PENG on May 18, 2009

    Sweet and full of love!

  • swatilohani on May 19, 2009

    great

  • Likha on May 19, 2009

    I like the positive note in this poem.

  • Brian Daniel Stankich on May 20, 2009

    Dee, thanks for sharing that! I\’m forwarding it to my wife. Brian

  • goodselfme on May 23, 2009

    Your flow is great, your words are light and the entire piece is smooth. TX for sharing your great talent.

  • rizzei on May 26, 2009

    realization comes after reading this simple but meaningful work of yours:) nice:)

  • Princess Dre on May 28, 2009

    nice work..I like the analogies used. God Bless..fan/Princess

  • Alexiandria M Michaels on Jul 20, 2009

    lovely and it just flows!

  • Luffy12 on Sep 2, 2009

    thumbs up

  • Parish Loveless on Oct 8, 2009

    “Sweet and light hearted” is a good description of this particular piece. I was thinking the same when I finished reading it. Then, I noticed others had written the same. I loved the feeling of spring and the warmer seasons, the beach and sunshine. Very nice to read early in the morning! ;)

  • Alexiandria M Michaels on Nov 17, 2009

    Love this!

  • Alexiandria M Michaels on Nov 17, 2009

    came back to it again! :)

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot