Our promised lands were stained with blood and then inherited by you and me!

Damn all the keepers of the truth—And their reinvention of history

With a thin veneer of reason—And a quick lick of morality

It’s behind this false façade—To which the puppet-masters hide

Always fighting the good fight—And always with their god on their side

Oratory indignation of revolt—The mad cries of the jingoistic kind

Nietzsche, Dante, Karl Marx—Utopian dreams of the idealistic mind

Social Darwinism and eugenics—The study of racial purity

That gave us Hitler, Stalin, Mao—The devils of the twentieth century

For although gone, they’re all still in us—You still hear their clarion call

And the bitch that bore them all—Is ever there, waiting, on heat once more

And damn all our forefathers—For their passed-down hate-filled legacy

Our promised lands were stained with blood—Then inherited by you and me

Their hatred fosters our hatred—And on this continuation we all ride

Drunk with the drum and rebel songs—And a misplaced sense of pride

They sing of victories long past—Odes to heroic martyrs of the brave

King Billy’s still riding back to the Boyne—To fight the boys of the old brigade

From Cromwell’s New Model Army—To Churchill and the gallant few

The Jacobites crushed at Culloden—Napoleon at Waterloo

At the grave of the Unknown Soldier—At the coming of the setting sun

The flower of a generation lies—In the fields of Flanders and the Somme

Well the victors write the history—With the vanquished merely as their foil

But the crosses of each are exactly the same—Scattered in the bloody soil

Lord Kitchener still points from his poster—Lenin stares out from in his tomb

General Gordon makes his last stand—In the dust-bowl of old Khartoum

Connolly rouses his rebels—General Franco his fifth-columnists

Uncle Sam aims a missile at heaven—Just in case god’s a communist

The one thing we’ve learnt from history—From every rag-tag shabby war

It seems quite clear in insight—That we’ve learnt absolutely nothing at all

Fighting for peace is the new slogan—It’s today’s great sound-bite ideology

Well fighting for peace, is no more or less—Like fucking for virginity

It’s the cult of jingoistic history—That keeps these myths alive

That gives us all one more reason—To kill, separate and divide

Also can read:

http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/THE-NIHILIST–Part-One–the-CULT-of-ORGANIZED-RELIGION.588477

 http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/THE-NIHILIST–Part-Two–the-Cult-of-Political-Ideals.626325

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  • manya on May 12, 2009

    Steve, these are extreme emotions brilliantly portrayed through words. If I ignore the swear words, this is one of the most exhilarating piece of work that I have read so far!

    -manya

  • Poetic Enigma on May 12, 2009

    This is a great poem,
    Strong words,
    Very intense work

  • Darla Cooke on May 12, 2009

    A great poem and very well written.

  • Sheila M on May 12, 2009

    Emotionally intense piece. loved it!

  • Duff D Moss on May 12, 2009

    Yeah bloke – that was really good. Had a punch – I could feel the emotion behind it. It is indeed rather sickening when you reflect on it. Some great lines there too.

  • Kaavs on May 13, 2009

    Appreciate the effort put into research backing the theme…

  • Kate Smedley on May 13, 2009

    Very intense and powerful Steve and well said, great poem … Duff’s right, it is sickening when you think about it.

  • swatilohani on May 16, 2009

    well crafted

  • Pully on May 16, 2009

    Powerfull Exciting Frightening all in one well done Steve

  • marisolflamenco on May 18, 2009

    Strong, intense and powerful

  • jamie mullen on Jun 10, 2009

    cool

  • John Sarkis on Jul 28, 2009

    Very good! I especially like the change of tone thingy….

  • Chris Marlowe II on Aug 15, 2009

    Confronting the Devil in Me… Like that! (It’s the story of my life too!)

    Like this Puppet Master Poem even more! (Although the One & Only PM is me, of course.)

    What a fluent style you’ve got. Almost as good as

  • RS Wing on Aug 17, 2009

    Very impressive. Well articulated with an angry rhythm and meter of history repeating itself and how we fall prey to the frenzy and hysteria of propaganda and philosophy\\\’s of flawed trajectory. Really interesting style and your serial theme is consistent. Great prose.

  • David Crerand on Sep 8, 2009

    A thoughtful, at times gut-wrenching anti-war poem worthy of its predecessors of the sixties. Well Done!

  • raptor22 on Sep 8, 2009

    interesting and though provoking. Well put.

  • BullwinkleMuse on Sep 8, 2009

    This such a visceral, glaring and blaring manifesto against so much that I share your distaste for, that I fairly rose out of my chair to cheer you on. So well done.

  • Used to be Shelly on Sep 8, 2009

    Wow, nice.

  • BradONeill on Sep 9, 2009

    Great Poem Steve you freaking hippy. I enjoyed the rhythm and the flow very much. Yes the war for peace thing is ridiculous I prefer war to eradicate my enemies and bend the will of those who oppose my way of life. The thing a lot in your camp fail to understand is if war is not waged you give up everything. For example had we not fought Hitler what would Europe look like? And God is most certainly not a communist if he is I say read the launch codes! LOL

    Good work brilliant write and you my friend and sympathizer with all of our enemies are still a great writer and an even better man!

  • Brenda Nelson on Sep 9, 2009

    first time for me reading your stuff, I too sympathize with each side..
    God clearly doesnt favor sides.

  • oldster on Sep 9, 2009

    Great job Steve— I may be a middle class ex- factory worker from Surrey, but I like it just the same mate.

  • Rod Ferrandino on Sep 11, 2009

    By Jingo, that was good. The phrase, “By Jingo”, can be traced back to the 18th century (some say even earlier); the saying was said to be a softening of “By Jesus”.

  • Sterling Christianson on Sep 14, 2009

    I really dig this trilogy series. So much rich imagery and color through the centuries you reveal. Just conformists we have become wherever society let’s us dwell. Really like the political theme….have to say , our human condition hasn’t really progressed, just the technology to proliferate much of the same rehetoric and skewed philosophy’s. Another top shelfer Steve.

  • Lily River on Sep 17, 2009

    This is your most brillant piece of writing that you have done! I love ya you hippie! Keep writing. I like you have thne capability to cause others to reasess their ways of thinking.

  • XXElleXX on Oct 12, 2009

    Deep but not vague..you say it clearly and you don’t sugar coat nothin’..and best of all..you don’t bend the truth :–) In 1900, everyone was jingoistic and thought war led to fame and glory. So they all eagerly signed up for World War I. This piece has the jingoistic intensity of 1914..as I read this I thought of all the soldiers who fought in the front line..what must have been going through their heads..disillusionment, anger and sufferance. For me Steve..this was very poignant and extremely well-written :-)

  • lillyrose on Nov 29, 2009

    Only one two words for this great master piece Steve.

    CITIZEN SMITH:-)

  • hfj on Apr 18, 2012

    A well written piece Steve. We truely haven’t learned our lesson as far as war is concerned Steve, and probably never will. Evil rulers have used war as a platform down through history as a means to steal, rape, and to kill their adversaries. Well done.

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