Charlie was likable enough this is true.But he had funny ways thast wasnt understood.Will everyone be suprised when he reveals his true colors.

                                     

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                                         Old man Charlie was about eighty-one,

                                         with white hair and bright blue eyes.

                                         But yet Charlie was a very short fellow,

                                         five foot tall and had an Irish accent.

                                        

                                         Charlie always had a twinkle in his eyes,

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  • mystery writter on Oct 19, 2009

    Very nicely written and a lighthearted piece to read.I liked it.

  • cardy on Oct 19, 2009

    A lovely poem, a sweet write liked it a lot.

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 19, 2009

    A very creative and imaginative piece! I liked the whole concept and you executed it wonderfully!

  • Guy Hogan on Oct 19, 2009

    This is the kind of poem that brings a smile to the face of a reader and the reader is glad that he or she read it.

  • Butterfly Musings on Oct 19, 2009

    an awesome write!

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 19, 2009

    A wonderful piece of work..

  • Emma Green on Oct 20, 2009

    Brought a smile pn my face! Excellently written

  • Joe Dorish on Oct 20, 2009

    Made me smile for sure, nice poem Payge!

  • Chris Stonecipher on Oct 29, 2009

    Hi Payge,
    This is a fun read my friend. I can\\\\\\\’t believe I missed this one.Thanks for sharing.
    Blessings to you,
    Chris

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