The last minute collector of stray objects. Remember when you see that last lot of things and go, Oh Shit! Where do I put these?

The “Oh” Box is so useful

Battered and tattered though it may be.

When I feel I have finished

All my packing suddenly I see,

Half a dozen small things lying around

Some on the table, maybe on the wall

Or perhaps a rug on the ground.

Where will I pack them all?

I look through cartons already full

The line of trunks will be no help at all.

“Oh” I think to myself, “What bull!”

Where’s the phone? I need to make a call.

To ask my husband what to do

Get more cartons or buy a new box

to pack these remaining item, phew!

That’s when I see the “Oh” box.

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The oldest one that we own

I actually inherited it from father

Each time I decide its to be thrown

It takes our luggage farther.

I end the call, my decision made

I pick up what I want to toss

through all the left over stuff I wade

across the room to the “Oh” box.

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  • payge on Jul 17, 2009

    I remember my kids having one of those when they was growing up,wish I knew what happened to it…great piece to read anywway.

  • George W Whitehead on Jul 17, 2009

    It seems like your box is a good old friend, Cashmere. Look after him!

  • theresacall on Jul 17, 2009

    cashmere great poem. i liked it. i think our house needs a few of those oh boxes around.

  • clay hurtubise on Jul 17, 2009

    Oh e-bay!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Darla Cooke on Jul 17, 2009

    Nice poem.

  • gaffneygirl on Jul 17, 2009

    Your father’s old box has character as so I’m sure the man that owned it.

  • Uma Shankari on Jul 17, 2009

    Enjoyable.

  • Grace Kathryn on Jul 17, 2009

    I like the oh box!

  • Sasha DuQuoitts on Jul 17, 2009

    I read this out loud and really liked the rhythm and rhyming, very cool poem and understandable, clear, concise, original, very very good!!!

  • Ask Cash on Jul 18, 2009

    Payge, when I was growing up it was the same box!
    George, it just got a fresh lick of paint. Check it out here http://www.picable.com/Objects/The-Real-Oh-Box.875369
    Thanks theresacall, clay, Darla and Uma.
    Gaffney Girl Did you see my dads pic in the poem I wrote about him? Its here http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/Fathers-Day.752293
    Thanks Sasha, glad you enjoyed it.

  • Lostash on Jul 18, 2009

    Surprise and delight on every opening.

  • cashmere on Jul 19, 2009

    Thanks lostash

  • T. Rex Mcgoogle on Jul 19, 2009

    I liked your poem. Without Oh Boxes I wouldn’t have any souvenirs that I refuse to throw away.

  • maranatha on Jul 30, 2009

    We have an Oh box too, storing the stuff we will never part with. A memory box.

  • Katie Marie on Jul 30, 2009

    Haven’t to move in quite awhile but still have some of those things sitting in a box, never unpacked.

  • littlemama76 on Jul 30, 2009

    i always find more stuff to pack after I think I’m done lol. Great job!

  • Littlekid137 on Jul 30, 2009

    This got some laughs. Nice one!

  • Cebah on Jul 31, 2009

    Nice poem :)

  • Karen Gross on Aug 1, 2009

    Sounds like you have moved a few times.

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