What happens to houses when they are neglected?

High on the hill in the wind and the rain
Watched by the leaves of the ancient oak tree,
Stands an old house ravaged and worn
Forgotten by its long flown family.
Dusty attics tell of a lifetime
Spent in the walls of the rambling homestead.
Spiders scuttle between rows of boxes
Which hold the tale of the life that it’s led.
Lift up the lid of the box in the corner.
Dresses so yellow, so fragile to touch.
Who once had worn them to great balls in winter?
Which gallant young men had admired them so much?
The creak of a rocking horse breaks through the silence.
How many children have ridden its back?
Much loved and used toys spill over the floorboards
Musty old books fall from moth eaten sacks.
There’s no longer a mother to tend to her young ones
No father working hard to provide for them all
There’s no longer the laughter of children long grown
Just debris and dust and crumbling walls.

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Comments (10)
  • michelled on Sep 16, 2008

    very nice, trully enjoyed this poem.

  • Marion Brady on Dec 27, 2008

    A really nice old fashioned sort of poem. I really enjoyed it.

  • Carina Staples on Jan 9, 2009

    A lovely description. It sounds like a time long ago

  • Poetic Enigma on Jun 21, 2009

    Very Vivid Poem, As If Your Poem Was Taking Me There,
    Great Poem, Very Nice (:

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 23, 2009

    Good job. I thought for sure the answer would be:Clay buys it and rehabs it, loosing his shirt in the deal!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 27, 2009

    As Poetic Enigma rightly pointed out, very vivid. I felt sad when I read -There’s no longer the laughter of children long grown. But that is life :|

  • Butterfly Dreaming on Apr 24, 2010

    Wow, what a great poem. It has a beautiful sense of style and the imagery draws you right in, keep up the good work!

  • Erin Miller on Mar 7, 2011

    That is a depressing poem but well written nonetheless.

  • Jacques Berkeley on Dec 6, 2011

    Good!

  • ittech on Dec 26, 2011

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