We are all good citizens, we follow all laws and lead a mechanical life, which some times becomes so boring and colorless, every government should grant one law breaking day to each citizen, when he or she can break any law and remove the frustation’s …let’s enjoy the law breaking day…

Today is my law breaking day ,

Today i will sleep late in the morning ,

and i shall be reaching late in the office ,

I drive a little too fast some times ,

But as i do it today ,  that anyway doesn’t really counts ,

Today i would break the law of gravity ,

and fly about to different places ,

that i had never been before ,

The smoking law , i can break today ,

I will smoke where ever i wish ,

I hate queueing up ,

i will not follow any Que rules today ,

Today i will hear  the loud music , 

Today my car can can horn at any place ,

I won’t probably be charged disturbing the peace ,

As i would like to break into the chambers of law makers ,

I will tell them to start working for the money we pay them ,

They will not get any other money from us ,

unless they balance the budget and start working together ,

They must make sure that the tax laws should be balanced ,

and loop holes should not favor millionaires ,

Why should we have to struggle and pay our taxes ,

and large companies don’t pay due to loop holes  ?

I would demand a balance in our society ,

and punishment for the corrupt and unfit politicians

and i am sure i would not end up  in prison ,

because today is my law breaking day , lol

What about you ?

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  • wonder on Dec 1, 2011

    I would like to join.Amusing portrayed a serious issue.

  • Yvhes P. on Dec 1, 2011

    Very nice post. Well written and expressed indeed =)

  • trionny on Dec 1, 2011

    i wish i could break the law too…

  • aheed411 on Dec 1, 2011

    Good

  • ricara on Dec 1, 2011

    Fun but dangerous

  • Giovanis Sandi PutraLucifer on Dec 1, 2011

    good, keep continue

  • Vivek Ratan on Dec 1, 2011

    so 1st december is a law breaking day,girish

    have a happy law breaking day

    nice poem

  • Yvhes P. on Dec 1, 2011

    Great post. Well written and expressed. Kudos to you =)

  • indianwriting on Dec 1, 2011

    all the best…keep posting articles from wherever u land up ;)

  • Rosettaartist1 on Dec 1, 2011

    Before I even read it I thought “I’d break the law of gravity. I wish I could fly!” Ha ha! How I laughed when I saw your line! You made my day!

  • girishpuri on Dec 1, 2011

    thanks

  • CHIPMUNK on Dec 1, 2011

    Sounds great

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 1, 2011

    I like it

  • T. S. Lewis on Dec 1, 2011

    Nice post

  • vijayanths on Dec 1, 2011

    Interesting share.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 1, 2011

    I love the idea of a law breaking day. There are many things I would be tempted to do.

  • LoveDoctor on Dec 1, 2011

    Awesome& very creative. Let’s see law breaking day, I would run all the red lights and cut in front of every slow driver and cuss them out too. LOL.

  • LoveDoctor on Dec 1, 2011

    Awesome& very creative. Let’s see law breaking day, I would run all the red lights and cut in front of every slow driver and cuss them out too. LOL.

  • KittyK on Dec 1, 2011

    Great poetry with an issue that we are all concerned with…

  • Moses Ingram on Dec 1, 2011

    Interesting.

  • rgreenfield on Dec 2, 2011

    law breaking day… interesting!

  • realityspeaks on Dec 2, 2011

    Interesting share

  • ittech on Dec 2, 2011

    great post good write

  • Vicky247 on Dec 2, 2011

    Well written report thanks for the share.

  • DanielD on Dec 2, 2011

    Laws are to be broken

  • ittech on Dec 2, 2011

    i will not conform to some Que rules solar day ,

    Today i will listen the tacky activity ,

    Today my railroad car can can warning device at public square ,

    I custom in all likelihood be polar distressful the accord ,

    nice one

  • Harvey Smithson on Dec 3, 2011

    great poetry. very emotional. I don’t know what would happen if you really break the law for one day.

  • Vinaya says good bye on Dec 3, 2011

    This is delightful read.

  • megamatt09 on Dec 3, 2011

    Very fascinating.

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 3, 2011

    Can I come with you? It sounds like fun.

  • Tulan on Dec 3, 2011

    that would be a fun day.

  • lonelyplanet on Dec 5, 2011

    Fantastic words expressed.

  • FX777222999 on Dec 5, 2011

    Dangerous day I think. It leads to chaos.

  • Judy Sheldon on Dec 6, 2011

    I like some of the thoughts but not all. It was a very good poke at some of the injustices in our world, but we require law or there would be chaos. Many people are undisciplined, even those who supposedly maintain the law and order.

  • allergy1 on Dec 7, 2011

    Great article, write more!

  • yes me on Dec 8, 2011

    Hmm… I’m sure it might lead you down the rocky road to ruin… I think you should start a day for the poor, find someone you know is poor, and see if you can do something for them cheers

  • yes me on Dec 8, 2011

    Hmm… I\’m sure it might lead you down the rocky road to ruin… I think you should start a day for the poor, find someone you know is poor, and see if you can do something for them cheers

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 8, 2011

    A fun piece. I wouldn’t pay the hiked-up electricity bill.

  • ittech on Dec 9, 2011

    now is my constabulary cave in epoch ,

    Today i will sleep deep in the dawn ,

    and i shall be motility latish in the role ,

    I swing a lilliputian too hurrying some abstraction ,

    But as i do it nowadays , that anyway doesnt actually nobles ,

    Today i would develop the construct of seriousness ,
    brilliant thanks

  • ittech on Dec 16, 2011

    very good one thanks nice one.

  • Peace4all on Dec 16, 2011

    excellent piece of writing!

  • Socorro Lawas on Dec 17, 2011

    Just crack the law, not break it.

  • girishpuri on Dec 17, 2011

    thanks to all

  • AWritingSighting on Dec 18, 2011

    Like this very much! In an era where everything is fast paced and goal driven, it sure is nice to do nothing! every now and then :)

  • scheng1 on Dec 18, 2011

    haha, sounds very rebellious.

  • nurzaira on Dec 18, 2011

    :) nice poem about law breaking day

  • Kristie Claar on Dec 20, 2011

    nice poem

  • Godspoetsinprint on Dec 21, 2011

    A good idea, but anarchy never works.

  • juliachild on Dec 22, 2011

    good share…..

  • whoisbid on Dec 22, 2011

    Go for it!

  • juliachild on Dec 24, 2011

    thanks for sharing…

  • mdrkarim7 on Dec 26, 2011

    Law is made to break!

  • juliachild on Dec 27, 2011

    great share …..

  • Safa on Apr 30, 2012

    good one…

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