This is a poem I wrote for an english assignment and found it’s characteristics to be very dark and mysterious.

A single ray of light

Appeared from through the trees

Like the hope left in my heart

Like the scatter of the leaves.

 

Exposed am I to the arms of death,

Which call to me day and night,

They promise me an escape,

From this terrible fight.

 

I cannot move a muscle,

I’ve given up for good,

Then I see someone emerging,

From this dark and endless wood.

 

Exposed am I to the arms of death,

Which follow me everywhere,  

They promise me an escape,

From this land I cannot bear.

 

As the man moves towards me,

His rifle held up high,

I get this unknown feeling,

That I’m about to die.

 

Exposed am I to the arms of death,

Which point the way for me,

They promise me an escape,

To a place I want to be.

 

Bang, Bang, Bang,

It echoes as I fall,

Bang, Bang, Bang,

I’m no longer standing tall.

 

Exposed am I to the arms of death,

Which sing their song of sorrow

They promise me an escape,

A today, a tomorrow.

 

As I hold my head up high,

I stare into my killer’s eyes,

Not full of regret or sadness,

Just hatred, death and lies.

 

Falling am I to the arms of death,

Which make me numb to pain,

They promise me an escape,

From this life I had in vain.

 

Death opens its arms wide,

It seems like an open heart,

The moment I’ve been waiting for;

The time we’re not apart.

 

Enclosed am I in the arms of death,

And it’s here I’ll always roam,

But I often regret my promise,

For I can never call it home.

 

There’s a light shining ahead,

And as it greets me with love,

I turn away from this world,

To reach that sanctuary above.

 

 

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  • David Irvine on Apr 13, 2009

    Nice 1st poem Lee. Well done. Keep going.

  • ladybaby on Apr 14, 2009

    I once had an after life experience, and I can relate to this poem. Very well written.

  • Gail on Oct 8, 2009

    What a wonderful poem, i can just imagine being in that person’s shoes and experiencing thaose feelings.

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