The Other Red Riding Hood

Atanacio on Nov 21, 2009

Little red riding…

She was a little red riding,

and a pair of eyes watched from hiding,

her hands thundered down

on her picnic basket,

as it fell to the ground,

and she would shout,

when the wolf jumped out,

what big eyes you have,

allowing her words to be heard,

the sentiment was drowning,

little red riding was frowning,

she hesitated when she needed to run,

instead of doing what needed to be done,

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Comments (9)

Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 21, 2009
“Cute, so I presumed that this red riding hood got eaten.” LMAO
Lady Sunshine on Nov 23, 2009
Poor Little Red Riding…you need to run little girl! lol.
Sammy2000 on Nov 23, 2009
off the wall pa
willie wondka on Nov 23, 2009
in fairy tales little red riding hood gets rid of the wolf, so i have no fear that she will be ok in the end, nice short poem,loved it.
Hansika on Nov 24, 2009
nice
Atanacio on Feb 10, 2012
thanks for reading guys
Atanacio on Feb 26, 2012
again thanks for reading
Jan1969 on Mar 24, 2012
another good share
Bobby-Kam on May 21, 2012
this was creative brother man

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