A painting of a woman diving into clear water.

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The painting,

a woman peering,

staring,

with a slight edge,

over a ledge,

with arms reaching up,

a woman diving,

it captured the moment

when her arms and head

first pierced the water,

cutting cleanly into

the emptiness below,

it was just a painting,

but it put on a magnificent show.

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Comments (5)
  • Hansika on Nov 11, 2009

    nice poem….thanks keep sharing

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 11, 2009

    Nice one, Atanacio!

  • Sourav on Nov 11, 2009

    very good lines!

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 12, 2009

    Great piece of work

  • Sammy2000 on Nov 12, 2009

    a good piece

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