Round.

Let’s paint our tales of that was that
In vibrant colors from our hat
The wonders of the once was you
Is now the subject of their chat

So fickled is their point of view
It hardly matters if it’s true
Let’s splash on colors just to see
Perhaps we’ll paint a someone new

Each brush strokes a new fantasy
Of how they dreamed our lives might be
And each detail a new display
Of someone wishing they were me

What wonders we did paint that day
When clarity was brushed away
And shades of mud where colors bright
This memory of foolish play

Is this the slosh of my delight
Is the dreams I had at night
Was all we did this blot of shame
When did I learn to lose my sight

But in the shadows far from blame
A canvas waits for us to claim
And paint a truth upon this mat
Our next mistake won’t be the same

 

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Comments (14)
  • tankermone on Feb 4, 2012

    Deeply, thought-provoking, and good!

  • Dora77 on Feb 4, 2012

    one extra chance is what counts….
    Martin..very good.

  • pogi253 on Feb 4, 2012

    nice post

  • fragile18 on Feb 5, 2012

    Nice one.

  • mdrkarim7 on Feb 5, 2012

    Brilliant as ever..

  • Nidhi Rai on Feb 5, 2012

    Good share.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Feb 5, 2012

    Bravo Martin dear.Moves like my paintings and u dug poem wow coool

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Feb 5, 2012

    Bravo Martin dear.Moves like my paintings and u digged poem wow coool

  • aheed411 on Feb 5, 2012

    A large share

  • Safa on Feb 5, 2012

    Good.

  • LadyElena on Feb 5, 2012

    Lovely Poem – it brought back memories of my visit to a Picasso museum in Europe.

  • Elove Poetry on Feb 5, 2012

    it’s good… as always

  • zaugis on Feb 5, 2012

    good poem :-)

  • erwinkennythomas on Feb 5, 2012

    I rather paint houses

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