Nice poem. It made me think a little about my favorite jogging trail. It used to be crowed, but now nobody uses it but the occasional jogger or artist

awesome work.

I wonder if the path’s like Frost’s less trodden road.

Nice work and great imagery.I see the path…

Makes one feel sorry for the path.

very visual image, which I think, is haiku’s greatest advantage. Well done.

Very nice haiku.

It goes to show how we have all gotten so “busy”, we don’t take time to enjoy the simple things like just walking a path or trail.

Nice imagery..

I bet that path could tell a tale. Nice work.

Christine

”once i had many friends

now i lay all alone bare

who does really care”

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Well written.

I could relate. Short but deep.

Will

Brings back memories of my childhood.

Short and sweet. Well, not so much sweet as sad. Great work though!

I feel sorry for the path but maybe it is better to be appreciated by a few who love you.