This was a grea write! Looking forward to reading more from you! Happy Writing!

Lovely poem!

I like the rhyme pattern and I love the poem. Very good read.

Very Lovely!!!!!
Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
~ milty

great write. keep em comin

I sometimes forget that God is there…especially during the rough times…thank you for reminding me.

god will be there for anyone who needs him and has faith in him, good poem.

Great article!

I loved it! You’re right! God is always there for you even when no one else seems to be.

. . . You’ll be loved no matter what. Thanks. Great reminder.

Great poem, I like it!

Lovely poem. It’s good to know that ’someone’ is always there – thank you!

God is our strength.

A doctor visit yesterday makes this poem vivid for me. He is my friend.

someone should make a poem called the perfect gf XD

I don’t have a boyfriend so I say perfect best friend instead,very nicely written.

This is good, Jane Jane. One reads the title and thinks one thing, then reads the poem and realizes it’s about something else entirely. God is truly our best and closest friend, and He’s always there if we would just seek Him. There is no earthly friend or family that we can say that about. This is a reminder to us also to be grateful and give thanks in good times and bad times.

I like the smilie-faces used in the poem. Makes it real

I find it difficult to realise sometimes. I have more of a Goddess than Him to look to. But thanks anyway : )

HELLO JANE! I FINISH READING, THIS THAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN, AND EVEN THOUGH THAT MY TRADUCIÓN IS VERY BAD, I COULD INCLUDE/UNDERSTAND THAT THESE SPEAKING DE GOD, AND SHARE THAT THIS WITH US ALWAYS FOR SOCORER TO US, IN THE JOY LIKE IN THE AGONY, AND ONLY IF WE WATCHED THE SKY, AND WE SPOKE WITH WE ARE HAPPY, I AM TOTALLY IN AGREEMENT WITH YOU, AND ME CONMOVIO, DISCULPAME THAT DOES NOT KNOW ENGLISH, BUT VERY TUNA, I ARRIVE MYSELF AT THE HEART! THANKS JANE

Once again, very good write about an important subject that you portray well.

A very inspiring write, thanks so much for the share! =]

Oww I like it alot! The only things I would alter would be:
If sadness is all you feel

And you want someone to be thy heal
(And you want someone to burden the heal
Call His name and He’ll be there

With open arms eager to care
(With open arms to hug you here)
Ask His help in all your agony

Pray to Him to say sorry
(Pray to hin to stop this tradegey.
Thank Him if or if not happy
(thank him if you re not happy,love him when sapppy.
He’s the best friend no one can be.=)

Nice work,a lovely message to this poem!

inspiring,my friend

Not my style but I like the message behind it! Great work

That was wonderful.

I like this one, good job. Is this what you want from a boyfriend?

Good work….

I like this one…lovely advice..

Nice write…

Wow you have top shelf stuff too keep up the good work.I liike it a lot so I will aply this to my God.Thanks

Nice write. Short and simple.

A well written inspiring poem. Thanks for sharing.

inspirational

Interesting poem, I like how you made the title seem like you were writing about one thing and then it becomes apparent in th end you were writing about something else.

Great poem.

wow! this has to be my favorite, I always feel this way always!!!! wow great poem, girl!! hope to hear from you soon!

very nice poem you sure got some skill

Lolx, a very nice poem! great poetry my friend!

right. He is always there

is his name Jesus?