A description of the perfect poem.
A poem should be uncrackable
Heard tell of a truthful lie?
Sadness unrepeatable
read as happy, talked as wry
Sneaky, representable
Organized to crash
Roller coaster is as laughable
Your mind an inquisitive mash
A start of something new
An inter reactive brew
Take it as how
It’s sounding like now
Start the swing and drive it through
Nearing the end
The verses get shorter
Written work beginning to bend
The dish-out of a mortar
The rocks of which are made to defend
Whatever war shall try to do
The senses stop to renew
And the bullets begin to shatter
Problems not meaning to matter
Infinitives like forever
Sad as sin but nowhere never
I like the message and everything but like I have said you need to mix it up. I understand that you have your own writting style and that you can write however you want but I am just trying to give you a little advice so that way you can become a better writter. The way you are writting is fine but I am just trying to help you become better. Maybe you could try to write a poem without rhyming anything becuase I think that could work for you. Hope you like my advice and keep writting 
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