When you are so flat out
not needing a hang on Visitor
That Just wont leave.

Please don’t get me wrong.

I love visitors, there is though a time and place for every thing

but some times there are those ones

that just don’t get the hint

or that just sit there not even offering to help when your

obviously busy as, /  you have some thing going on, rushing about.

Those ones that just make themselves comfy on the couch,  settling in.

Of course this is OK if you the time.

Well I was thinking of the perfect

prick for those annoying visitors

Now you all know by now I

so much enjoy surfing the net

for that image that has impact

well I was thinking to me

that no way would there be the image that I had in my head,

ha ha , yes their was, so here you go

That couch that would nudge quickly I hope.

                           ♥♥♥ STANDING PROUD♥♥♥

                        ♥♥♥ STANDING PROUD ♥♥♥

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  • joyhyena29 on Feb 11, 2010

    wow..^^nice post^^

  • Anupam Kachroo on Feb 11, 2010

    hahaha .. nice couch ;)

  • wonder on Feb 11, 2010

    HA HA,am welcome? please inform.

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 11, 2010

    LOL, they would definitely get the hint with a sofa like that, where do you get one! Witty poem.

  • johnnydod on Feb 11, 2010

    lol Im not gonna sit on the sofa with you … thats for sure

  • AlmaG on Feb 11, 2010

    Where can I buy that cactus couch? lol! Great poem.

  • Muhammad Sohaib Roomi on Feb 11, 2010

    I will do every thing for you. ;)

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Feb 11, 2010

    Ha ha ha…give me that cactus couch. Excellent post.

  • lillyrose on Feb 11, 2010

    Hahaha… could also make them stay longer, they have their own water supply!!

  • Stan Wilson on Feb 11, 2010

    that sure is some couch,
    its not a place to lounge,
    or a place to rest and slouch,
    if you dont want to say ouch.

    nice one can do they make for the lazi-boy too……

  • giftarist on Feb 11, 2010

    Waaaaa..

  • ganeshgolha on Feb 11, 2010

    Nice work, also give feedback to my work your valuable feedback will help me to improve my writing skills.

  • Frances Lawrence on Feb 11, 2010

    I like it!

  • Atanacio on Feb 11, 2010

    lol you’re crazy oh well I’m never visiting you anytime soon LOL great post

  • T. S. Lewis on Feb 11, 2010

    Ouch. LOL

  • Mr Ghaz on Feb 11, 2010

    Great share! wonderful and creative poem..I liked it! cheers 8)

  • ashan1614 on Feb 11, 2010

    Absolutely perfect!

  • Neva Flores on Feb 11, 2010

    I love it! LOL!!!! Wonderful!!!!

  • Darla Cooke on Feb 11, 2010

    I need a couch like that.

  • Angela Ohm on Feb 11, 2010

    LOL …I think those unwanted visitors would get the message !

  • Silent Wasp on Feb 11, 2010

    Great article lol

  • stryka66 on Feb 11, 2010

    You just hope they’d get the point, eh ?

  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Feb 11, 2010

    Ouch, a prickly couch. Picking out the needles could be rather interesting lol. Wonderful write Standingproud. I really like your thingy at the bottom as it shoots…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • LewSethics on Feb 11, 2010

    a fun post

  • bailieman on Feb 11, 2010

    Good laugh. Hope it comes in a bed shape as well cause that would shift them.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Feb 11, 2010

    that sofa is cool

  • mkd1788 on Feb 11, 2010

    interesting piece..

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 11, 2010

    Where can I get that couch? I think I am the annoying visitor…lol!

  • Inna Tysoe on Feb 11, 2010

    Made me laugh.

    Inna

  • diamondpoet on Feb 11, 2010

    I know a few I like to put on that couch, great post.

  • albert1jemi on Feb 11, 2010

    good one

  • athena goodlight on Feb 11, 2010

    LOL! I would LOVE to have a couch like that. I do have annoying visitors at times.

  • Brenda Nelson on Feb 12, 2010

    I heard painting guest rooms yellow is a good idea too, because Yellow is a color few adults like.

  • Shirley Shuler on Feb 12, 2010

    Lol, where can I buy that couch!!

  • Temjen Imchen on Feb 12, 2010

    Couch says it all. Nice post.

  • Lord Banks on Feb 12, 2010

    Good funny article, I had a bloke come round once to look at a car I was selling,whilst he looked through the paperwork on the car, he started watching a fishing tv program on my tv!! I was not impressed I asked him to leave and watch it on his tv! he didnt buy the car either!. good one LB

  • sambhafusia on Feb 12, 2010

    hahaha…funny..nice share standingproud….

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 12, 2010

    i would love this….

  • Tina Cassello on Feb 12, 2010

    The picture and it’s caption really said a lot but you gave a nice explanation of why one should have it.

  • CA Johnson on Feb 12, 2010

    LOL! This is so funny. This is the perfect way to get rid of guests who won\’t leave.

  • devsir on Feb 13, 2010

    I enjoyed it
    HA HA

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 13, 2010

    I should think that would take care of the problem.

  • deep blue on Feb 13, 2010

    I could order for that best couch in town. A funny thought, well done.

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Feb 14, 2010

    If they don’t get the hint, then they are plain stupid.
    Awesome article

  • Starpisces on Feb 14, 2010

    haha,, interesting poem!
    … but… who knows that irritating visitor may find that couch very special and interesting and wants to stay longer to admire the couch longer, ha ha ha.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Feb 14, 2010

    I loved the couch, where can I get one? :) This was too funny because we all have had visitors that just wouldn’t leave.

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 15, 2010

    Ha ha! That’s wonderful. I must show this to my hubby. He gets very restless when people outstay their welcome. I have known him to start hoovering around them before now. A great article.

    Thanks for the welcome back, by the way. I really appreciate it.

    Christine

  • Phill Senters on Feb 16, 2010

    Ha Ha… Pricks for pricks
    :)

  • devsir on Feb 17, 2010

    Nice poem.
    I like your photo

  • neet on Feb 17, 2010

    I would think twice before visiting anyone………I thought annoying people was fun …not anymore.

  • alensmith on Feb 17, 2010

    nice and well presented post thanks for sharing

  • Belinda Dobie on Feb 17, 2010

    Hehe. I’ve had annoying visitors who would sit on a couch like that just to irritate me… Great write.

  • clickmarbin on Feb 17, 2010

    nice ideas

  • standingproud on Feb 18, 2010

    A prick for a prick
    to funny hahaha

    hay fanks guy’s I just so
    much enjoy being able
    to put a bit of sun
    shine in to your day.

  • ladydryle on Feb 20, 2010

    hahaha…nice couch!!!!theye’d rather stay comfy on the floor….:D

  • devsir on Feb 21, 2010

    Quite Interesting Poem

  • XXElleXX on Feb 21, 2010

    Hehehehahaha…damn!…some prick upsets me Standing Proud…my dogs sense it…then it’s all over bar the shout :-)

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Mar 1, 2010

    Your title had me guessing. ;-)

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