When you meet someone that is so perfect in every way and you feel intimidated to the point that you see your flaws. You are in awe of this person and decide to follow their path and try to do as they do, taking it all in and learning all you can from this person.

My spirit blooms

 at the sight of you.

What else can I do?

You are the perfect specimen,

and the very regimen

that I need tonight.

You have every right

to refuse me,

but I hope that you will see

me in my true form

and realize that

I am who and what

I say that I am,

worthy of your trust.

This is a must.

I tend to be extroverted

when I spend time with you.

I am free to be myself,

and it doesn’t matter to you

whether or not I have wealth.

You are so awesome

in your caring abilities,

you show it through

all of your faculties.

What a man I have come to know

who gives so much of himself

and lets it show.

There aren’t many

that are like you.

That is why my love for you

 is so true.

I don’t deserve you

that is for sure.

You are so much more mature.

I wish I was like you

in so many ways.

I know that I can learn from you

all of our days.

I intend to take heed

and take your lead,

following your path

and allowing your spirit

 to cleanse me in a bath,

making sure that I receive

all of you that I can,

even if sometimes I must

do it by holding your hand.

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Comments (6)
  • AlmaG on Feb 6, 2010

    Lovely piece and what you said in your intro is true.

  • VTech on Feb 6, 2010

    Good Post, Thanks For Sharing.

  • jimbob1 on Feb 6, 2010

    DB…This is a well written rhyming poem about your affection for someone special…am glad that you have someone like that in your life. As usual, like the rest of your work, you are always deserving of getting my I Like It vote, so I have registered it. Thanks.

  • T. S. Lewis on Feb 6, 2010

    So talented you are. I enjoyed it. Gives me a worthy feeling

  • Stan Wilson on Feb 6, 2010

    have to agree and endorse the comments of our fellow writers here,and we know true talent and ability when we see,hear and read it.and you certainly have got it..excellent poem..

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 7, 2010

    Very Nice written….well done…

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