A poem inspired by Sisyphus and the monotony of writing.

He was as Sisyphus,  journeyed on an

incessant conduit of reiteration;

the pen was his bolder, impelled against the

steeped inclines of a densely littered page.

dark ink ran arid from its slender cask, a

gorge bled fallow by the sum of its harvest;

a garnering of insensible words,

each more redundant than its precursor.

Only through an arbitrary barb of conscience,

as the nib scribes furrows on the passive leaf,

does he consider the nature of providence,

through its many guises of futility.

And though the permanence of tedium,

curtailed his callow exuberance, 

its feats sustain him through their labour and

resistance of a purposeless living.

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  • Marie Milton on Oct 1, 2010

    “dark ink ran arid from its slender cask…”

    That’s a great line :) . As with all the rest of it :)

  • LewSethics on Oct 1, 2010

    Writer’s block is like that for me sometimes, especially when I’m 90% finished with something and the end just doesn’t come to me.
    You know, you make us work to understand you lovely lines? Like Sisyphus, I read so far, then I have to go start over again, re-evaluating what I thought I knew.
    Are we guilty of hubris when we write?

  • L R Humphries on Oct 1, 2010

    Thanks Marie, I was happy with that.

    Lew, point well made – I was fascinated with the idea of the reader having to read the piece few times in the same vein of Sissyphus and the boulder.

    And yes, I think we can be. I know I am at least, the question is whether it is a good thing or not in moderation?

    Take care mate

    Lew

  • Raj the Tora on Oct 1, 2010

    Excellent English. Keep it up

  • L R Humphries on Oct 1, 2010

    Thanks mate, I do try ;-)

    Take care

    Lew

  • Chris Stonecipher on Oct 1, 2010

    I got stuck twice in the last two creative writes about prison and bank robberies. It took me two days to figure out how to end the stories creatively and still be entertaining. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Chris

  • mkd1788 on Oct 2, 2010

    greatly expressed..loved this..

  • L R Humphries on Oct 2, 2010

    Thanks MKD, I appreciate the read and the comments!

    Take care

    Lew

  • LCM Linda on Oct 2, 2010

    Very well expressed. The monotony of writing brings forth another feat. Well done. Keep going.

  • L R Humphries on Oct 2, 2010

    Thanks alot for the read and the comment.

    Take care

    Lew

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