I was elated at what I saw in the pond, but it was only short lived.


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A few months ago I frowned at the pond,

I even yawned,

When I crossed the pond

Early in the morning

As I went for a walk with my spouse ;

All of a sudden the pond was cleaned,

All the green algae was gleaned,

Thanks to the District Admin,

Now the pond was crystal clear

I could even see the glimpse of the moon very near

A few weeks later

The pond was filled with a matter

I could see a few saplings of lotus

Indeed I was very much elated.

Now the pond was full with lotus

Its large green leaves spread out

In the pond throughout

By and by I could also see the buds of lotus

Peeping out of the pond

In all their humility;

I was so tempted to pluck a few

Thanks to my spouse

Who stalled my stupidity

I was heaving,

I was yearning,

I was longing,

But I could only see those lotus

In all their glory

Which had fully blossomed

Posing themselves as brides,

They were such beautiful damsels

But I could have only a dekko

And their mere sight made me happy.

A few days went by.

The summer intervened

The lotus leaves were no more green

The majestic brides were not seen

My heart was aching,

I felt very sad,

In the end I resigned

To the fact:

‘Beauty is only ephemeral.’

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  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 15, 2009

    Nice poem with great expression. Give you “liked it”

  • Joie Schmidt on Jun 15, 2009

    Interesting poem – - nice work*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Sir Poetry on Jun 16, 2009

    Great poem I enjoyed it a lot. We all get tempted sometimes to do stuff. But we just need others to tell us we are being an idiot. Great write! Look forward to reading your stuff further.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Jun 16, 2009

    Lovely poem. Yes, beauty fades quickly; I think that is what makes it so precious.

  • ken bultman on Jun 16, 2009

    Good poem. Good for me, too. Right at the last I had to run get my dictionary. lol

  • George W Whitehead on Jun 16, 2009

    Nice poem from a perceptive poet.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 16, 2009

    A beautiful description.

  • Darla Cooke on Jun 16, 2009

    Very nice poem and pic.

  • Ramalingam on Jun 16, 2009

    I am blessed and encouraged with the comments of thee.Thank you

  • chitragopi on Jun 16, 2009

    Very lively description of how the lotus grew and bloomed.

  • Sheila M on Jun 16, 2009

    Wonderful description of the Lotus

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Jun 21, 2009

    Wonderful poem! Would it have made a difference if you had plucked just one of the lotus buds. Liz

  • CutestPrincess on Jun 22, 2009

    this is so wonderful…

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