A poetic commentry on domestic violence in todays society.

First he said he loved her
Then the fist went through the door
Then he said he loved her
As her head bounced off the floor.  

Then he said he loved her
As he kicked her in the ribs
Then he said he loved her
As he hit her before the Kids  

Then he said he loved her
As the knife came down her way
Then he said he loved her
As on the floor she lay.  

Then he screamed I love you
As the Police took him away
Then she know the price of love
And what she had to pay.

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  • P Hayden on Aug 30, 2010

    Great poem, really liked it! :)

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