Missing you.


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My eyes are closed
And my heart follows
I’m led, by the sound
By the promise
Of you

The ache is steady
I can feel it in the absence
Of warmth from my arms
From the absence
Of you

Today, the sky is blue gray
But, it exists only
In my memory
In my fond thoughts
Of you

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  • nobert soloria bermosa on May 19, 2008

    very lovely poem Liane

  • william on May 19, 2008

    Ywah,I agree! Kwwpon writing.

  • tracy sardelli on May 19, 2008

    A heartfelt, sweet poem, nice one

  • salvatore on May 19, 2008

    sweet, beautiful poem. well worded, well written

  • Heart Stone on May 19, 2008

    Hey Lianne,

    wonderful poem, full of longings and expectation.

  • Francie on May 19, 2008

    Liane, this flooded me with old and very sweet memories. Thanks for this one =)

  • Lucy Lockett on May 19, 2008

    This was exceptional! Very thoughtful and beautiful.I liked it sooo much.

  • Susan on May 19, 2008

    Short, sweet and very beautiful; as always.

  • quiet voice on May 19, 2008

    …very nice, very soft.
    Take care.

  • sharon on May 20, 2008

    so light, like a song etched in the heart…more poems,keep up the good works!

  • Speed Limit on May 20, 2008

    Truly exceptional. It made me feel like you were writing to me.
    Thanks.

  • Terry B on May 25, 2008

    Great job there!

  • Devin Aldine on May 26, 2008

    Another beautiful poem. The words roll together very nicely.

  • acecampillo on May 27, 2008

    Very emotional.
    I really appreciate this kind of poem.
    God Bless!

  • blacktieandsneakers on Jun 8, 2008

    nicely done..it brings out feelings i have

  • Ira Hayes on Jul 23, 2008

    I really liked this one – very good.

  • Csilla Kiss on Sep 19, 2008

    it`s really nice!

  • Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Sep 25, 2008

    I can feel the emotions…marvelous!

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