He wasn’t like the rest…

The puffy fish who has earlobes,
He wasn’t like the rest,
He didn’t fit in,
At the aquarium,
He swam.
he began to feel,
Like his earlobes were about to peel.
One day he would be famous,
He will go far,
Soon to become a Hollywood star!

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  • jakeyclifford on Jan 17, 2009

    great poem

  • Sotiris on Jan 17, 2009

    Puffy fish became a hollywood star??? Wow

  • Joni Keith on Jan 17, 2009

    Sometimes it’s a good thing to be different. Nice poem.

  • jimy1666 on Jan 17, 2009

    Nice one over here.

  • Lauren Axelrod on Jan 17, 2009

    Very cute and original

  • Darla Smith on Jan 17, 2009

    Cute poem!

  • nutuba on Jan 17, 2009

    Cute, this would make a great children’s poem. Nicely done.

  • ML Sheldon on Jan 17, 2009

    That was cute. Being unique is definitely a good thing!

  • Pablina on Jan 17, 2009

    random, but cool. As above being different is def not a bad thing. Could be a deeper meaning behind your fun little poem.

  • Debra. on Jan 17, 2009

    Cute poem, Denus!

  • writingares on Jan 17, 2009

    lol pretty random =) but still good work keep it up

  • seashell66 on Jan 17, 2009

    Really nice.

  • Bren Parks on Jan 17, 2009

    Very cute!!

  • MysLykeMeeh on Jan 17, 2009

    that was cool—that puffy fish isn;’t Nemo? right?

  • friendshipter on Jan 17, 2009

    gREAT POEM. kEEP IT UP.. UR FRIEND, NIKKI101

  • Pete Macinta on Jan 17, 2009

    The puffy fish who has earlobes, — at first I thought you were talking about me! LOL!

    Thanks for the chuckle!

    God bless,
    Pete

  • AC Hamilton III on Jan 17, 2009

    Only you Denus..lol Good, imaginative..Oh my, what else to say…lol…A spin-off take resembling Rudolph..

    Great one.

    AC

  • C Jordan on Jan 17, 2009

    That put a smile on my face!

  • Mr ghaz on Jan 17, 2009

    nice poem! I like it! ..series of cute poems from you Denus. Well done!.

  • James DeVere on Jan 17, 2009

    How is his career going ? j

  • Genevieve Horrall on Jan 17, 2009

    Really cute Denus. I really liked it.

  • georgew on Jan 18, 2009

    Cutely surreal, well done.

  • Bick Parker on Jan 18, 2009

    Very imaginative!

  • Ziggy C on Jan 18, 2009

    Good job

  • Paula Mitchell Bentley on Jan 19, 2009

    Weird and funny at the same time. Cool.

  • numismatic on Jan 19, 2009

    Damn I am thinking, Ah whats the fishes name he sounds like he beongs in Hollywood judging from the way he sounds.

  • David Cartier on Jan 19, 2009

    nice pom i have some to but was told you could help me get hooked in to stumble group please help

  • rutherfranc on Jan 20, 2009

    hmmmm.. is this a reflection of how you feel?

  • Tusaani on Jan 21, 2009

    This reminded me a lot of the ugly ducking story. Great poem.

  • nesita on Jan 22, 2009

    amazing

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